Oh god. Please, keep on writing this! It's AMAZING.

Very much enjoying your story :)

Wow. I would first like to say that this is a brilliant story. Just started reading it yesterday and... well, I'm hooked. It's well intense. Okay, back to chapter 9's review...Sid is a right psychopath. He is absolutely insane to think that the world would be much better without gays! Crazy crazy man!

What else...OH, Naomi, shame on you for cheating! It's an awful sin to commit.

Love the way you tie in the original story line with your own.

UPDATE PLZ!

-MM xx

WOW!

Ok first...congrats, that was a hell of a nice chapter.

But his "reason" to the whole attack thing are a little off... I

mean, its a little nonsense...but I think its ok since he is a psychopath and all but still...

Whatever...thanks for the update, looking forward for the next chapter.

OK...emily memory was erased and all of that...nice idea by the way. But why doesnt Naomi remember Emily?

And this Sid is really creepy. Not the nerd guy we're used to. BUt I loved him!lol...I love this crazy psychopaths kind of characters!

Nice chapter by the way...things are starting to get more clear.

Wow! Naomi sure can talk...A LOT!

And wtf is *ZZZZZZZT* *ZZZZZZT* *ZZZZZT*?

Anyways...thanks for the update, nice chapter there.

WTF! She killed Gina? But Gina is a peach!

Will they be a couple at some point? I mena...it would be weird to date the girl who killed your mum! lol

Very intense and crazy chapter, but for some reason I liked.

aww...poor Freddie!

does he always have to die? lol

cook and ems a bad ass...didnt see that coming.

hahaha...poor Panda!

This mission is kinda of scary...and you're giving very little away!

Thats so unfair! :(

great chapter though...;)

oh...loved the chapter title. Very creative!

great start,I love those secret agents type of stories!

keep going...you're doing great!

so, just a quickie afore i go do more work.

thats all very good, but why doesnt Naomi remember emily?

woah woah woahhhhhhhhh! :O just got back from a lack of internet and now my brain has exploded from the twists and turns of this story! maaaaaaan! morrrrre pleeeeeeease!

Enjoyed this chapter! Sorry for the short note, but somehow I caught a crippling cold.. I just woke up to check for an update and you didnt disappoint! Can't wait for the next!

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Great chapter! Shed a little tear for Gina, but like you said... it had to be done! Glad that you are putting in some of the Gen 1 cast! Loved them as well! Can't wait for the next!