Great job on the story, I liked it alot, keep up the great work and keep on writing.

i liked it. Its dark, but its dark because its realistic. It made me picture it in black and white, like the comics. Looove the comics.

i liked how you depicted the struggle with the guilt for not feeling guilt in this fic. One turtle's made himself hard to their decision, while the other is facing the harshness of it. i wish those turtles had been identified though, but i'm guessing the hard one is Raph maybe? Made it a little hard to read at the end; Not knowing who's who.

One more thing, some of your sentences run a little too long. This is something i struggle with a lot.

Example: *The scientist slammed into the wall hard, where he remained a crumpled, groaning heap for a few moments until he was forced up against the wall by a pair of strong hands.*

The description was totally awesome! Really grabbed my attention, but it's a bit of a mouthful. It can wear a reader out. i've been trying to break my run-offs up into pieces. Still practicing :)

Anyway, great story. Loved it. Awesome job! Please write more!

Deep, dark, and interesting.

Hey, I remember reading this at Stealthy. Great job on this fic. You've tackled a very sensitive issue and have done well in presenting it. I would think the Turtles would think twice about what they did, but I can understand why they'd make that choice. Nicely done.

The Bubbly One,

Shell

I like this take on the TMNT, very mature, very thought provoking. I also love the idea of taken an over-done plot point and twisting it into something completely different. I am glad to have read this :)

Peace,

PSG

Wow. That was deep. I have to say you took me by surprise; I totally thought this was gonna be one of the "pick which turtles live" scenarios, but this was even better and soo intense. I mean, WHOA, I was on the edge of my seat and it was so cool to picture them as seriously hard-core, angry ninjas that didn't have any qualms about bringing serious pain to their enemies!

Ahh, what a question and what a terrible bind for them to find themselves in. I absolutely loved it, you did a wonderful job portraying what was going on with little words and injecting a lot of emotion into it, especially with that ending conversation. The last line was perfect. Loved it!

Very intriguing story idea, here. I like the serious take on this scenario, and the execution was perfect for the subject matter. Some nice turns of phrase, too-like this one:

""What are they?" the voice was deceptively calm, but beneath it there was a definite promise of pain and death.

A lot of pain before death."

I like it when the turtles are portrayed as... well, ninjas. Dangerous. Lethal. And very used to violence. And you're right, I think, that they might have qualms about sentencing another creature to the life they live. Well done!

KT