its pretty good, although it could be longer, but hey, thats my opinion. please update soon

:D it's good please update soon

I hate the girls uniform you should make some adjustments so it would suit Saki. I really like to story so far please update soon

lol i feel your pain. im trying to write the first couple chaps for a story b4 i post it and i just keep coming up with more ideas and end up having to write them down. ill be waiting 4 the next chap

All that hard work really paid off! Well done-I can't wait for chapter 2. 3