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   LandofMidnightRain 6/11/12 . chapter 1Wait. Has this been rewritten in the time I wasn't reading it? Last time I saw, Danny was adopted by the Fentons and is Menshen and Crystal's bialogical son, Jazz has nothing to do with the prophesy, and Oblivion didn't come in until much later. What's going on? |
| Senside 5/18/12 . chapter 23 One of the better chapters :) keep it up. |
| RooRooNinja 5/17/12 . chapter 4 This is an awesome chapter! Poor danny, I dont think I could do all of that and stay sane. |
| RooRooNinja 5/17/12 . chapter 1 Wow, the chosen one fits the name of this story perfectly! |
| The Awesome God Apollo 3/11/12 . chapter 22 Uh-oh. Naveen's pissed. Can't you give him a hidden injury or sickness that he can blame the loss on? Because really, you've made me love him. And it's kinda sad that he got beaten so badly. *pout* Oh well. YAY YOU TOOK MY ADVICE! An Oblivion chapter! Or half a chapter... It did work well though. It gives a different perspective :) Okayyyy... the lood thing is kinda gross though. I must admit, I skipped that part. It's really off-putting. Bleargh. But I get that it's necessary. Oh dear Vampires? Wow. This just keeps getting more complicated. Oh well. UPDATE! |
| DPraven 3/8/12 . chapter 22 I like it, but it got tedious a few times. I think shorter more frequent chapters would work better |
| DPraven 2/22/12 . chapter 21 :) gonna check out your Deviantart now |
| The Awesome God Apollo 2/21/12 . chapter 21 Well, at least there was Naveen whump! But aw, Didja HAFTA make him weak? *pout* okay, sorry I just have this thing for my favourite characters being the "all-powerful" one. Ehehe. Never mind. But nice chapter! I loved it! It's really great to see an update from you after all this time... :) |
| The Awesome God Apollo 12/17/11 . chapter 20 I 3 your story. I usually hate OCs, but I've taken a liking to yours. It just seems a bit weird that they're suddenly so compliant to Zelophehad's wishes. Anyway, Naveen's mah fave char now. Whump him, PWEASE? *puppy dog eyes* |
| aslan333 12/16/11 . chapter 20 good chapter |
| DPraven 10/10/11 . chapter 18 Dannys pov please! And it might be interesting to see from sams or another humans pov. Great story btw |
| aslan333 10/4/11 . chapter 18 good job on the last chapter |
| Senside 10/3/11 . chapter 17 I really enjoy reading this story, but It's all Crystal PoV! We barely hear anything from Danny, Sam, Valerie, Tucker and Jazz! We need some DannyxSam Asap :D |
| aslan333 10/2/11 . chapter 16 good chapter. i bet u crystal will kill tucker if he don't stop. |
| aslan333 9/30/11 . chapter 13 good chapter |
