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Anen Aers
2007-06-12
ch 1,
abuseI, ahh, don't mean to be mean at all. And I tend not to judge other's writing talent. But the thing that bugs me is, why is this in Battlezone? There...is no mention of the actual game Battlezone in there unless I can't read.
Mobius Shadow
2002-11-17
ch 1,
abuseThis is one of those really old stories, mback before everything was fonted the same. But the admiral is right; this isn't battlezone.
shadow13
2001-11-16
ch 1,
abuseseeing as it's be a little more than a year since someone reminded you...

This section (the "Battlezone" section) is for a game called Battlezone, not for stories involving "battlezones". Therefore, you should move your story to a place where it is appropriately placed.

I don't mean to sound threatening but if you don't move the story or reply to this comment then I will have to tell the staff so that they can move it, because you are obviously not active anymore.

Thanks,
-shadow
GrandAdmiral
2001-05-28
ch 1, anon.
abuseOK, but I would get rid of the bold typeset. Oh, and perhaps change the rating to PG.
Liz
2001-04-10
ch 1, anon.
abuseUh huh. That was, uh, okay, suppose....
Liz
2000-10-28
ch 1, anon.
abusei thought that was very impressive. i loved it so much.
Admiral Kelley
2000-09-05
ch 1,
abuse::sighs:: This story actually is pretty good but its all one long run on sentence. Fix that and you got yourself a fic. BTW ypu seem to have posted this in the wrong place. This section is for a game called BATTLEZONE not for fics that involve a warzone. I don't blame you for being confused this has happend several times before but please move this to where it belongs.
Zap Rowsdower
2000-09-05
ch 1,
abuseHey that was pretty good. You should edit it though, it looks and sounds like one big run on sentence.

If you want more Blaster Master Fic. Do a search for Title-)Blaster Master.

Zap Rowsdower
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