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| Anen Aers 2007-06-12 ch 1, | abuseI, ahh, don't mean to be mean at all. And I tend not to judge other's writing talent. But the thing that bugs me is, why is this in Battlezone? There...is no mention of the actual game Battlezone in there unless I can't read. |
| Mobius Shadow 2002-11-17 ch 1, | abuseThis is one of those really old stories, mback before everything was fonted the same. But the admiral is right; this isn't battlezone. |
| shadow13 2001-11-16 ch 1, | abuseseeing as it's be a little more than a year since someone reminded you... This section (the "Battlezone" section) is for a game called Battlezone, not for stories involving "battlezones". Therefore, you should move your story to a place where it is appropriately placed. I don't mean to sound threatening but if you don't move the story or reply to this comment then I will have to tell the staff so that they can move it, because you are obviously not active anymore. Thanks, -shadow |
| GrandAdmiral 2001-05-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseOK, but I would get rid of the bold typeset. Oh, and perhaps change the rating to PG. |
| Liz 2001-04-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseUh huh. That was, uh, okay, suppose.... |
| Liz 2000-10-28 ch 1, anon. | abusei thought that was very impressive. i loved it so much. |
| Admiral Kelley 2000-09-05 ch 1, | abuse::sighs:: This story actually is pretty good but its all one long run on sentence. Fix that and you got yourself a fic. BTW ypu seem to have posted this in the wrong place. This section is for a game called BATTLEZONE not for fics that involve a warzone. I don't blame you for being confused this has happend several times before but please move this to where it belongs. |
| Zap Rowsdower 2000-09-05 ch 1, | abuseHey that was pretty good. You should edit it though, it looks and sounds like one big run on sentence. If you want more Blaster Master Fic. Do a search for Title-)Blaster Master. Zap Rowsdower |