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Anendee
2005-08-10
ch 8,
abuseI know it has been a while since you have worked on this but i hope you continue to. i dont read many X-Men fics but i wil read a fusion like this one and i havent fouind many of them. i really enjoy what you have going here. i just hope that you continue with it. it is really well written and the characters are great.
AmberDraconian
2004-11-20
ch 8,
abusethis is cool! i would say more but i'm not exactly sure why i like it ^ ^'
Minako Nine
2004-10-08
ch 8,
abuseYou do this so much better then I did ;_;

I'm thoroughly impressed with this and want to marry this fic and take it home with me. There were a few bits of trippy grammer but the story and the pot movement were too compelling for them to really mean anything. I adore this. Write more. Pretty please? This is sucha wonderful story in a sea of mediocracy...
alydhe
2003-04-26
ch 7,
abusethis is interesting, will you please write more?
The Kitten.
2002-12-01
ch 7, anon.
abuseI want more Auntie.
Lady Evergreen... Being laz...
2002-08-12
ch 6, anon.
abuseHere's where I get really, really childish.....

WRITE MORE!!!! I WANT MORE!!!! I know you have it somewhere in your head... I want more!!!

Okay, now that I said that, I feel better. ^_^

Lady E.
Kasra
2002-06-01
ch 6,
abuseI'd been meaning to sit down and read this since I first saw it posted... now I finally found enough time to catch up on everything.

First of all, you've done a very clever job integrating the X-men characters into Gundam Wing characters. Your matches for certain characters were unexpected, in many cases, but actually worked really well - mainly due to the way you handled characterization.

Secondly, I appreciate the plot you've built into this fic so far. You do not need to be heavily-versed in X-Men lore (my knowledge barely goes past the old cartoon they used to show in the mid-90s, for example) in order to keep up with what's going on. Heck, even if you know nothing about X-Men coming in, I think the average reader could handle this fic with minimal confusion. That's the sign of a successful crossover.

Last, I think you're doing a pretty good job handling your first yaoi fic. I admit that at the start I expected it to go 3+4, but the way you've written the 3xR (I'm assuming this is a Cyclops/Jean pairing parallel) just works so well as to make the 2+4 preferable. Not that I mind 2+4, either ^_^

Anyhow, great fic so far.
Lady E. (Once again, too la...
2002-04-23
ch 5, anon.
abuse*wipes away tear* I am so proud of you!!! Your first yaoi, and soon you'll be going off to school and getting married. I think I'm gonna cry.

But really though, great fic. Let's see what else comes from that twisted mind of yours.

Ja ne!
Lady Evergreen.
fdver
2002-04-14
ch 2, anon.
abuseaddmore
Kaori
2002-04-12
ch 3,
abuseMost interesting.... I insist that you write more of this and soon!
Kywraith Amnesi
2002-04-06
ch 3,
abuseAh, joy. Happy reading fun time. My vocabulary is leaving me, sadly, but hey, I like your fic, plain and simple. Keep up the good work!
Jaid Skywalker
2002-04-02
ch 2,
abuseGood chapter! This is really interesing, and you're doing a great job.
Lady Evergreen (too damned ...
2002-04-01
ch 1, anon.
abuseHey there! You know I like this fic, but where's part two??? I know you have it!! Come on! SPILL!!!!! Anyways, catch you, catch me! ^_^
Jaid Skywalker
2002-04-01
ch 1,
abuseKinda wierd...but it sounds really interesting. I'd like to read more!
Kywraith Amnesi
2002-04-01
ch 1,
abuseHey Devon! I really like what you've done here. Good ideas, good description, and some cool powers thrown in. It's really interesting how you've made the characters into their Xmen counterparts. You used smirk a bit much, though. Anyway, good work and keep writing!
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