wow this is really good! I actually feel a little sorry for wendy in this, but theres always bebe for her ;)...that'd be hot *pervy thoughts* she did say she thought about it...err thought about that she thought about it...yea...that...ANYWAY this is a really good story its kinda weird though how no one is being clueless but everyone is being stupid XD update soon!

THANK YOU I hate Wendy portrayed as evil too.

The way you write their thoughts really shows their personalities. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Update soon!

I feel the same way as you, I don't hate Wendy like most people betray her in typical Style stories. She's not a crazed bitch (well apart from that one episode where she gets jelous and sends the substitute teacher to the sun XD). I actually somewhat respect her because of all of the things she does to help oiut causes. Anyways, I liked this story alot because she wasn't a crazed bitch, and she actually didn't mind it if Stan left for Kyle. Good story :)

Poor Wendy... and poor Kyle. And even poor Stan in a way - I think he truly loves both of them, and can't bring himself to choose.

This is very well done.

Wendy is my favorite SP character, though I know she's not one of the main charries. I love her. And I /hate/ how she is often demonized. So, thank you for this.

I love the slight nod at Bendy. Which is my OTP. I like to do Bendy and Style.

I really like that you even made it that Wendy did not want to hurt Kyle any more than Stan. I really feel like Wendy and Kyle could be friends, so I appreciated that little bit of caring about Kyle from Wendy.

This was well done, and you should be quite proud of it.

I was unsure about how this story would turn out when i opened it. I also believe that Wendy would be open minded about everything but i was unsure of how well someone could portray it. However, this was very amazing. Its very sophisticated and well written. The way Wendy treats the situation is perfect.

This is just perfect. In every way. Your flow, your grammar, the plot, your characterisation. Everythinggg.

You should be proud.