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| Mabgath 2002-10-26 ch 4,  | abuseNah, that was a good ending! For some reason, I've always loved fics with the legendary dogs/cats in - and this one is well written, with good characters, and a good plot, which helps. *g* Oh, I'm over-using the word 'good', now...but, anyway, please continue soon! |
| Dragonair2001 2001-07-11 ch 3, anon. | abuseWOAH! COOL! |
| Charles RocketBoy 2001-04-15 ch 3, | abuse Yay! Walk the Umbra will get updated! And this one just WAS updated! So... Had to look through teh other chapters quickly to remind myself of everything, but that's a minor gripe. Like meridan; she gets cool Pokemon, seems nice and she's named after one of my fave comics anyway! Donovan has apoint but he's still a prick. What, no scenes of Legendary God-induced devastation? Oh well... Be sure to destroy a whole city next time. |
| Alex Warlorn 2001-04-10 ch 2, anon. | abuseThe three legndary hounds aren't evil, there like their sky counter parts, conficting with the other to maintain a balance on there part. Also, Entai in the film, though a creation of Mi's mind, I think was close to what Entai would be like. |
| Charles RocketBoy 2001-02-16 ch 2, | abuse WHY IS THERE NO CHAPTER THREE FOR THIS?! I WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| Mitsuki 2000-09-08 ch 1, anon. | abuse*** |
| Mitsuki 2000-09-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow! That was awesome. I can't wait to read the next. |
| Charles RocketBoy 2000-09-06 ch 1, | abuse WHOA! Are these the Legendary Dogs (GS) or something new? |
| Charles RocketBoy 2000-09-06 ch 1, | abuse Cool! They sound sorta like the Legendary Dogs from pokemon Gold/Silver... |
| Phoenix2 2000-09-05 ch 1, | abuseOops, forgot to read the prologue first. Oh well. That was freaky. Can't wait for chapter 2! |
| Phoenix2 2000-09-05 ch 1, | abuseOh wow, that was awesome! I love your writing style, and the suspense was awesome! Don't waste your time with fanfics, write a novel! |
2000-09-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseSo, is Pa'Kira the main character, then? That should present a challenge if she ever enters an industrialized setting, eh? Either way, allow me to commend your writing ability: I commend your writing ability. But, come on! All she had to do was drink some Brisk Ice Tea, then she could have swum freely in the lava. Then, she could sing a song with Elvis and Rick James. OW!!! I FEEL GOOD... sorry. Good fic, anyway. Can't wait to see the rest. |
| Pikajenn 2000-09-05 ch 1, | abusePoor Pa'kira! I hope she's gonna be okay! You've got something good goin' on here! Keep it up, this rocks!!!! |
| Pikajenn 2000-09-05 ch 1, | abuseWow. That is soooo good! I'm going on to the next chapter now!! |
| Michael O'Hare 2000-09-05 ch 1, | abuseWow, there's an expedition that won't need anymore funding. Not a bad teaser for your story. You know what would've been worse, though? If Sigourney Weaver and Rick Moranis were in those statues. "Ash! If someone asks you if you're a god, YOU SAY YES!!!" |