This is an exceptional tale told a little roughly but with heart and originality. I never expected to see such darkness in the world of Pokemon. As I write this, it is up to Chapter 13. I hope this is not the end for Radic and his friends; I want to find out what happens to them next. And if I can actually continue my work many years later, I encourage you to do so too.

... needs maor update. i really wish they could've gotten revenge on him, especially since they were leaving the boat anyway

Ha. Ta and Ka's bickering reminds me of Devon and Cornwall (the two headed dragon from the "Quest for camelot" movie).

Biy, Ruby sure is prickly. Maybe she will mellow out and learn to trust humans in time

Poor, poor nova. I thought that it was cool that he saved Radic and accident from the Sychter because Radic reminded him of his old trainer when he was young

You're a huge loser.

Plot: Different people suck many cocks. Repeat.

SCORE: 2/10

FAGGOTRY: 1,0,0/10

I really like this story, but I'm a bit unclear on what happened on the S.S. Anne, between Radic and those other trainers. Was Accident raped? Anyway, post the next chapter soon. _

Holy heck.
This is fantastic. It's not often you can sum it up with wow.
I mean, it's so powerful. And it was going so well and then...
The characters are brilliantly portrayed. The story is fantastic. This is just amazing.

Woah... how do you do it, Zarla? This has to be one of the best Pokemon fanfics at . O_O Yay Accident! _ He's so cute. I'll go mad if you don't update soon. :D

Wow...

...WOW.

I'm speechless. This is...so...so wonderful. I can't beleive anyone could actually write a POKEMON story that's this good, for Chrissakes.

I mean, there's ACTION!"PARAS PAR!
ANGST!"CHU!
SEX!"UNH UNH UNGH!
EVOLUTION!"OW! I MEAN, ER-NINE!
...yeah. Well, I'm probably making an idiot out of myself, so I'll just say that I'll kill you and everyone you love if you don't keep writing this fic. Meanwhile, it's going on my favorites.*stamps "APPROVED" on the story and scampers away*

This story is great so far. Oh, poor Radic! Oh, poor Accident! *sniff* life goes on, guys, life goes on... We're behind u, supporting you all the way! please post the next chappy soon! _

Fergive me fer reviewin my own story, it won't load da review page fer some reason. This is just experimentation and I'll prolly remove this in just a bit...

Oh, poor Chan...it's the one that'll be taken advantage of...but at least Ta and Ka were able to help Kitsune. That was nice, helping the Ninetales that needed the attitiude adjustment...and it was nice of Kitsune, helping Ta and Ka...so, are we going to get to see Accident's final evolution to a Blastoise! HUH! I WANT TO! Radic, we're with you all the way! Don't forget! Oh, this is a good story...

Nova, you egotistical self-centered jerk! Of course, that last line was funny...oh, Ruby...you evolved. And you set your friend free. What could be better than that? Knowing that most likely your friend will become like the one you used to know...Radic, take good care your friends. We're still behind you!

Poor Kitsune...she didn't want to evolve, but she did...and she saved Accident, too! Oh, but she did so wonderfully! And she's a Ninetales now...of course, I doubt her attitude will have changed any. Maybe that's for the better. One by one they're evolving...I wonder when Accident will take on his final form...well, Radic, keep on moving forward!