"When I was on my ship, my deck mates weren't the ONLY ones getting booty!"
OMW that just made my whole freaking day! XD hahahahahaha ha

I can't believe I just laughed so hard at something that completely ruined my childhood. X3

O.o
...Wow. That was...something.

geez relax children! It's obvious that the author stated it was a parody/humor story which means it's not to be taken seriously.

wo. this is my favorite movie of all time. one of my favorite books as well. you completly disrespect everyhting that story stood for. I cannot believe you would make buttercup... just no. Buttercup is an inocent as any 5 year old girl. she is as about as intellegent as a girl of the same age as her innocents. but Westly loves her all the same. I am sorry but i have no interest for your story. i skipped to the end and neraly smashed my computer to bits. If you are looking for talent in something writing is good. you have a wide variety of vocabulary, but use your gift for good, not evil. Please take this into consideration. oh and..

STOP HATIN' ON THE PRINCESS BRIDE!

Lots of chicken for dinner- Monkeysuncle1

Good story overall, just personally I like Buttercup and Wesley was too much to be a fan of this story. However please let me know if you write another version of this. :) Good luck writing! :)

*snicker* Oh dear, oh dear...the fairy-tale can only last so long, I guess...

...and was that a Beatles line sneakily slipping itself into the dialogue somewhere along the way? XD

Few little grammar niggles that could use tidying up - ending dialogue with a comma, for instance, and "...after Wesley had gone/been through all the trouble of..."

Otherwise, amusing. :)

WHY! ! WHY MUST YOU RUIN EVERYTHING I WAITED SO LONG FOR!