Great job. Would love having Ronon as a masseuse after a long day at work.

I can't believe I missed this one! Thorry!

Very interesting. A crush on the big guy and won't give her the time of day? Not like Ronon at all. Seems more like he's getting hurt just to spend time with her.

For the record, I love storms. I grew up in Florida where hurricanes are born. LOL

I'm enjoying this challenge too though I seem to be the only one still writing for it. Not to worry. I'm having fun and that's what its all about.

Sandy

Love it! Absolutely fabulous!

You know Sheppard never really does pack enough food for Ronon... he eats like a dinosaur. Loved the story.

Real life has been majorly hectic so I am just getting to reading this. As always awesomely written and enjoyable read.

Aww sweet installment. Nice job. :)

This is so cute, Ronon who came to see her and told her he missed her! thank you for this little tale!

Really loved how he came to find her and helped turn her day around.

That was a good story. I like that he came to her. Thank you for the enjoyable story

sooo good... loved your offering.. this is really fun reading all of our twists on this little line, Nice to see her day turned around from the dark and stormy night..lol

Ahh, That was so...Fluffy...;-)

I'd say that's perfect weather!

Another great challenge response, and one that highlights Jennifer's responsibilities to the base. I know I'VE felt that way and I'm not CMO of anything. So I could really relate to that.

Great little story!

Ronon telling Jenn he missed her was a super squee moment. :)

Nice challenge response! Poor Jenn - I really felt for her missing out on a day she'd been looking forward to. You did a great job of showing her responsibilities and why she can't just take off when she wants to. Great ending having Ronon coming to find her - *grins* loved the neck massage - lucky girl! I like imagining the two together eating and talking about the beginnings of their new relationship. Well done you!

Oh my goodness, so great! I loved how Ronon's feet had a mind of their own. :) Great line! Poor Jen, but in the end it all worked out! :)