nice story! I would love to read more please continue soon RR 2 u layatz

Dude, as long as its Kira/Alexiel, I'm for it. Go! This is getting better. I like the way you express confusion within the dreams With the and all. Bravo on that!

Don't stop! I like to start out with a storyoutline before doing anything, but really don't stop at three chps

For starters I give you props on good grammar. If you want to express thoughts try italics. Second I'd like to say, I think you're chapters are *way* to short and way too fast paced. Pacing the story isn't a science, it's your own personal art though so, if you like your two paragraph long chapters, going at 90MPH, go right ahead. Next, if you know your character is OOC, then why keep them there? I find that I enjoy stories where my beloved characters, STAY my beloved characters and where magnificent Alexiel doesn't become a timid deer.

y so short..

COOL! PLZ CONTINUE!

Hey! This is so good! I just love this pairing! So please please continue! And please make the chapters longer! It' so frustrating the way the chapters are so damn short! Hehe Any way I'm looking forward to your next chapter!

DUDE! YOU GOT TOWRITE MORE! I LOVE IT! THERES NOT ALOT OF KIRA/LUCIFERALEXIEL FICS! _! PLEASE! SOON! :D!

Dammit you, it sounds like Anne Rice...*sob* why are you such a good writer?

Yay! _ I love this fic! Please put the rest up soon... there aren't enough Lucifer/Alexiel fics out there ;_;

cooll...please do continue writing! your precious betta reader wants more FAST!

Weird...! That brings a vivid picture to mind. (I didn't expect to see Alexiel on the streets of Tokyo like a regular person..!) The Japanese is a nice touch too... the poor thief _ Hmm... that's good.. I don't understand where you get the ability to write actual plots, but I like it! This whole Kira/Alexiel/Lucifer thing is cool.

Ooo...intreseting. I would like to read more.*

This is great! You're getting very good at this whole "writing" thing. This is an extremely confusing little fic-bit. I love it! It is magnificent the way you can introduce a story/scene to draw the reader in but leave him/her completely baffled as to what is going on. The drama and emotional angst is intriguing... I'll have to figure out how you do that. Now you're going to have to write more so's I can figure out how the fic ends. Yes. You *must* continue this fic!

A little short for a chapter but a very attractive start! Kira's attitude is quite him and the beginning line was pretty catchy too! Do continue.