WOW! This looks like there's a fantastic forbidden romance brewing! Great job! :D

- Silver

Don't cry.
Because I just left you a review.
Granted, I don't know what's going on. :3 But you've got a nice writing style.
*sunglasses*

Watching the brother of the woman you love go up in an inferno couldnt have been easy.

Glad to see this story is still going

I like. The only thing I can 'pick at' (not meanly, I hope :P) is that I don't think a soldier would be able to defy, yell at, etc. a General like that and get away with it. But anyway, good job, I hope you update soon :D xx

please write more soon I can't wait for the next chapter so please please please write it soon I absolutly love this story. :)

please please please please please please please (12 hours later) Please write more I have to know what happens will she marry him will she join him will she... I don't know but please write more. I BEG OF YOU!

OH BOY! YES A CC AND OC! What I read so far it's so amazing the way you write is beautifully done so please write more I'm about to read the 2nd chapter and Rusty being a Cobra Queen awwww he's asking her to marry him, in a strange way lol. But brilliantly done keep up the good work. :)

This is very good. Please continue:D

UPDATE SOON! i wanna see what happens

Love it!

Don't worry, I'm not stopping there. Not that I dislike the Snake Eyes romances out there... Not all of it, at least, but I was really craving something different. This reader likes her bad-boy and good-girl romance! And while Rex isn't my first choice *coughDestrocough* (Its the accent and Christopher Eccleston) he is a close second.

So, in attempt to not be a hypocrite I won't ask for longer chapters as much as I would love them, I do ask for more. As quickly as possible.

Love it!

Don't worry, I'm not stopping there. Not that I dislike the Snake Eyes romances out there... Not all of it, at least, but I was really craving something different. This reader likes her bad-boy and good-girl romance! And while Rex isn't my first choice *coughDestrocough* (Its the accent and Christopher Eccleston) he is a close second.

So, in attempt to not be a hypocrite I won't ask for longer chapters as much as I would love them, I do ask for more. As quickly as possible.

Nice side: Ahhh, getting interesting!

Crazy side: Longer chapters and I won't have to hurt you...D

Nice side: More!

Crazy side: Dangerous intense romance! D

I await your next update.

P.W.

Rex woman squee! Good or evil, he's a great character to write about; lots of angst/insanity/regrets/megalomania are fun to chew on.

I'd like to see where this is going . . . (hint hint!)

Thank freaking God that someone else is writing a Rex story besides me! I really want to see where this is going. I like this character and you have conveyed Rex very well so far. Keep it up. .

Wow, not bad...*shocked face* I could like feel the energy coming from the two main characters. Very good, beautifuly(is that how you spell it?) written. And yes I did get the main plot line D.