   fbmstar 3/13/12 . chapter 1"Look," Green says while trying to flatten the side of his hair with one hand while the other is pulling up his pants, neglecting his half unbuttoned shirt. (The challenger thinks he's definitely seen enough."Take a hint. I'm busy.
BEST LINE EVER! |
| Windsong 2/22/12 . chapter 1 a;sklfa;oserj I haven't read this story in forever and OH MAN, I love your humor. Flawless combo of cute and bamf! Stay perfect, bb! |
| Cat-Tuong 1/6/12 . chapter 1 Love the ending ;D Being a gym leader sounds like a pain in the ass most of the time X\ Great job on it all, keep it up _ |
| Serenity and Chaos 9/12/11 . chapter 1 ...Kekekekekeke... Ahahahaha! |
| ikeepitprivate 8/31/11 . chapter 1 It's hilarious how someone would randomly come and want to challenge Green XD |
| beautiful.disasterxo 7/9/11 . chapter 1 omg hahaha poor green in the last scene xDD mmm mmm doing naughty things with red now haha ;D i can imagine a furious red in the background haha oh gosh *giggles like crazy* |
| Artificial Dreams 7/2/11 . chapter 1 I laughed. I snickered. And decided that this was beautiful, and that you are amazing for writing it.
The writing was clear, the tone perfect, and overall you hit the right moments to earn a snicker from your reader. I just think I might have to go around recommending this to others... why yes, I think I shall
Anyway, not sure if there is a reason behind it or not but you have your option to accept Anonymous Reviews switched off. If there is a reason you did that, completely disregard this mention. But, I just figured I'd mention it because I know sometimes that thing gets turned off or on without warning or explanation so... just in case. You take care |
| Rezicca 6/27/11 . chapter 1 Love. 333333 I giggled through the whole thing. It was wonderful. |
| heart dipped in invisible ink 6/15/11 . chapter 1 WOW. Just WOW. I was laughing the whole time I read this! And I loved your characterization of Green; he was just so...Green-esque (if that makes any sense at all). There definitely needs to be more Green/Red stories like this! . |
| TangledMinds 6/14/11 . chapter 1 The end of this was hilarious! I can just imagine all of this happening you are a brilliant writer xxxxx |
| Arya May 5/16/11 . chapter 1 Wow. that was awesome. loved the part when green threw open the door... |
| CoolGlasses 5/16/11 . chapter 1 "Take a hint. I'm busy.
Dat line 'nuff said. |
| maple2839 4/30/11 . chapter 1 OMG This is so funny! I absolutely love it!
Please write more Red/Green! Your Red/Green fics are the best! |
| AnnaAsakura25 4/29/11 . chapter 1 OWO that was awesome
very cute and funny story! |
| xXCobalt Kitsune-chanXx 4/28/11 . chapter 1 There aren't enough red/green stories out there. so this is undoubtably a win. characters spot on and the ending was excellent. :D |
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