|Reviews for But to cry|
| Duilin 12/30/11 . chapter 1
Something about Elbereth and death rhyming really caught me off guard - and the fact that Elves, perhaps, were made to suffer and cry, instead of entertaining mortality. I never really looked at it that way.
| Tindomiel 3/16/04 . chapter 1
Brilliant, simply beautiful. What praise could justify this?
| chibimagic 5/4/02 . chapter 1
That was superb, wonderful, amazing, beautiful! You have captured the imagery of the Silmarillion perfectly!
| Woman of the Dunedain 4/25/02 . chapter 1
| Arwen Imladviel 4/11/02 . chapter 1
I can see the waves... the mountains... must be too much radiation from the screen! :)
| Oboe-Wan 4/8/02 . chapter 1
You amaze me. I don't even touch writing poetry in my native language with a ten foot pole.
This is just incredibly beautiful. The flashes of imagery just shimmer, and it really captures the atmosphere, and emotion of the Silmarillion.
A beautiful little jewel of a poem.
| Belphegor 4/5/02 . chapter 1
Cher Chat Noir, c'est superbe. I loved it - already knew you were very good at poems, but this one is beyond words. You express wonderfully the aching sadness of the sea-longing, as we might imagine it from the books - I really loved it. Bravo, c'était vraiment merveilleux!
Belphegorthe Weird One! :o)
| arynetrek 4/1/02 . chapter 1
this is beautiful. and such a wonderful poem subject... you've got the beauty/danger tension that just pours through Sil - in such a short piece that's impressive. good job!
| Soledad too lazy to log in 4/1/02 . chapter 1
Incredible! I wish I had read this before I wrote my story about this topic!
| Furius 4/1/02 . chapter 1
love the last three lines, so sadly true..
| Just me 4/1/02 . chapter 1
I know about Cuivènen. That was lovely and so very sad. You write beautifully.
| Lady Cheshire 4/1/02 . chapter 1
Very beautiful. And very original. I look forward to more of your stuff!
| Abigail the Jedi 4/1/02 . chapter 1
*sniff* Beautiful. Absoulutely beautiful.