I want something like this in canon! Well, you can add Christine and a little murder mystery (of course BB can't go vacationing without little murder mystery :P ) and I'll be really happy :D

lovef this to the bones, and Parker was such a sweetie! :D

Perfect conclusion! The show itself would end like this: so teasing, so promising! The producers should hire you.

Why stop here. Please continue. You got me hooked on this story.

Very cute! I wish the show had more of Parker...his interactions with B&B are always so adorable.

I thought it was good.

Most enjoyable! You've captured the essence of Booth and Brennan perfectly. I look foward to more chapters.

Beautiful!

Ha, everyone is demanding additional chapters, but I will not. I mean, there's always room for more, but this is satisfying just the way it is.

Oh, the dialogue is so THEM. I love your Brennan. "I would have thought you would rather spend time in Hawai'i on beaches and consuming fruity beverages out of pineapples."

And, "His jaw tightened and his chest puffed out slightly in a universal mammalian expression of pride." That's hilarious! I never thought about it that way.

God, I wish we could see the beach frolicking in person. Mm. B/B in wet bathing suits...

And then the end had the perfect mix of subtle but squee-worthy emotion, and humor from Parker.

"His eyes were dark, full of longing, still sad, but no longer edged with bitter anger. She slid her hand forward till their fingers touched and a slow, small smile spread across Booth's features.

"Ew! You two aren't going to kiss, are you?" Parker's lip was actually curled."

So well done.

love it great story def need another chapter

The End? You should totally continue this!

so sweet! it can't be the end! nooooooo!

"the end" what is that all about. The story is amazing and you are such a great writer. Write more for this story (add more chapters) or start a new story. What do we want? more chapters! When do we want them? right now!

Enjoyed it. Wish there was another chapter.