AAA!*Hugs her favorie Australian, Azula loving fanfiction writer, but seeing as Fyre's 'Hugs' are tackling people...
AAA: AHHHHHHHH!

Sorry about that...

One thing I noted right away, it would look better if you used the "s instead of 's because if you say like 'Don't' it looks like it ends before it does if you just skim through/quick read.

First scene: You left out a couple of lines, I don't know if this is on purpose, but if not, reply to this review and I'll tell you which ones you left out
I like how you had it a few hours before her coronation, rather than a few minutes like it is normally asumed.

Scene two: Once again, a couple lines are changed or missing, which I'm sure only I noticed because I'm a geek...

I LOVE how appropriate the song was for that XD

Scene three: You missed Zuzu's line "Those summers we spent here seem so long ago. So much has changed..." Once again, I don't know if this was on purpose, sooo...

Poor Azula, watching Ty Lee be pampered by boys D: The scene about Long Feng and the Kyoshi warrior was sort of random here, but the next scene always gets me
Scene four: It was all a dream...huh. Poor Azula, she has bad dreams. One time, I had this one where I got hit by a bus, and I woke up, and my lamp fell over two seconds later, which gave me a heart attack.

Scene five: This scene was great. One thing; It's high-strung, not high and strong. Mai finally showed emotion, hehe.

Scene six: SOZIN'S COMET IS HERE! So, she would have fixed her haircut, but she didn't have time? Facinating :D

Scene seven: Water Tribe witch XD Wonderfully Azula. I always wondered if Azula could hear their little whisper conversation. 'A battle between Phoenix King Ozai's children.' That made me depressed. Look at you, making Fyre the happy ducky depressed. 'Her dear, noble brother' I can see Azula thnking that in a sarcastic sort of way.
Dude. This scene gave me nightmares, mainly because I watched it at midnight and fell asleep the moment it was over. It sooo freaked me out, and yet Aang getting shot didn't bother me.

I always wondered if she was trying for lightning, and why didn't the lightning murder them both with the water and metal and all...(Gets idea for fanfiction...
I couldn't imagine thinking that my mom hated me, I had no friends, my brother hated me, and my dad just leaving me like that...*Sob
The last paragraph was great.

Originality: Really good, I've seen it done a few times, but each one is differant.

Characters: You got Azula down really well.

Overall: 7/10

Oh, and TEAM ZUTARA FOR THE WIN!

Fyre

A great one-shot I liked it well done and best of luck with your schoolwork.