loved the chapter. cant wait until the next one

GAAAHH! YOU NEED TO UPDATE! I HAVE BEEN WAITIN FOR LITTERALLY TWO YEARS FOR THIS UPDATE!

LOVE IT!...but it seems to be unfinished and that is rather unpleasent. The rating change seems to fit in well. Please finish your entranting tale of Jareth and Sarah.

love is in ze air o and by the way great language for the wolf and witch it almost felt like i was readin some one talk in midevil langauge it was cool

ignore felinegrace! i loved the details of the romance! it makes this storey even more exiting! it makes it more suspencefull! anyways! this is one of the best stories i have read sofar! i have always loved this movie! please update soon;)

AWESOME WORK! One of the best so far

DarkAnubisAngel

OMG! HURRIE AND FINISH PLEASE! I LOVE THIS STOREY! GAHHH! THIS SUSPENCE IS KILLING ME!

Could we PLEASE try to keep this cleaner? We need to not allow our fantasies to become realisic and it's obvious that you like to think of these types of kisses and touches. I understand that some kisses need to be shared because this is a romance. But you're turning it into a pornographic story. Let's not.

I am loving this story! I can not wait to read more. Hope you upload soon. _

OMG! YAY! THEY KISSED! I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! OMG I HOPE THE WOLF DOSNT GET TO HER! AND I HOPE JARETH KICKS HIS ASS! PLEASE HURRY!

oh i do hope the goblin king treats her nice! he is still in love with her after all!

I really enjoy your stories! Keep em coming!

Well things are heating up now, in many ways. I think so far the rating is all right by the way. That wolf is just terrible and now he's got a crystal, good idea. He and the witch are very good characters. Keep up the good work. :)

It looks like it could stay "T" with this chapter...but I would appreciate letting me know if "M" happens. I don't mind the violence part but I don't like the ucky smut stuff. An A/N with warning should do the trick!

Good chappie. The old hag will be ancient by the time the wolf has all these children with Sarah...if he can even HAVE kids with a human.

Look forward to how wolf plans to bother Sarah in her dreams and if Jareth will realize the dreams are being hijacked.

Interesting story. Could you give me a heads up if it goes M-rating? I do not want to read any smutty stuffage:)

Was wondering why Hoggle was acting weird. Surprised Jareth didn't freak out about Sarah's bruises. Will she tell J that the wolf tried to rape her? Me thinks the possessive king would not like that.

Thanks!