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| Reviews for Max's Adventures |
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   shannaplusklaus 5/8/12 . chapter 1More! More! |
| Stormygio 3/18/12 . chapter 1 Um, er, wow. Well, that could have been written better. More than a little OOC in the short time we see Max. What's up with the hummingbird? Seriously, is it that hard to write from a character's POV? Bland, bland, bland, BLAND. Basically nothing happens. Oh, we meet the OC, /splendid/! Dude. Just no. Thank you and have a nice day. |
| ILoveDoughnuts 10/21/11 . chapter 1 OMG. It has FANFICTION. I read this story for my extended language arts class. For once, I actually enjoyed the book. Today, I was bored with reading and writing DTL fanfiction, so I decided to see if this story had fanfiction. I had highly doubted it, but I discovered FIVE STORIEE. JACKPOT. From the unfamous DTL fanfic writer, ILoveDoughnuts |
| 91698padfoot 6/20/11 . chapter 1 Nice! I wonder what will happen next! |
| WWEDiva99 5/9/11 . chapter 1 LOVE IT! Nice work, keep on writing:) |
