 Lady Knight Jocelyn 6/17/10 . chapter 5You simply must update. Your story is so original, I am so intrigued to see where you are taking it!
You are such a fantastic writer, you really do need to update!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
 Crystal Dreams 7/13/07 . chapter 5 Ack! Wonderful! Scintillating!
CONTINUE! PLEASE? x3 |
 AvalonOrchid 4/4/05 . chapter 5Oh wow. This is so great. I like it. |
 Deanna 4/4/05 . chapter 5 I just found your story today, and I love it. I wish there were more of it. You're sense of comedic timing is impeccable. I was actually laughing out loud at some parts. I do wish you'd continue! |
 lyn 10/15/04 . chapter 5 write more |
 A very happy person 9/15/04 . chapter 5 Yune*is facing wall* I know you're out there!
Rio: Why are you talking to the wall?
Yune: Uh... *turns around* Well, I'm doing a review.
Rio: Oh... and how does that have anything to do with the wall?
Yune*thows Rio in closet* NOTHING! Now back to my review. *turns back around* Now, it says on the fanfiction that this hasn't been updated in almost two years. This is one of the greatest fanfics of the Labryinth that I have ever read. There are no excuses for not ADDING MORE! So, I'm going to turn around and count to three. You BETTER add another chapter... I KNOW YOU'RE OUT THERE!
Ja ne*evil grin* |
 Miriya 4/16/04 . chapter 1I just found this story and I love it. Please continue it. |
 Venus Smurf 4/15/04 . chapter 5I desperately hope you continue this soon. It's brilliant, it's funny, it's perfect. You're a gem among authors, and I absolutely adore you. |
 Venus Smurf 4/15/04 . chapter 4As always, your jokes-and its a mark of your skill that I can never see them coming-have me falling out of my chair with laughter. You're truly wonderful at this. |
 Venus Smurf 4/15/04 . chapter 3Once again, your eloquence and your sense of humor amaze me. You always know just what to say and when to say it, and I don't think I could possibly be more impressed by you than I already am. |
 Venus Smurf 4/15/04 . chapter 2Have I ever told you that I love the way you write? You're so descriptive, so poetic. Every word is nothing short of inspirational. |
 Venus Smurf 4/15/04 . chapter 1Not confusing at all. Just wonderful, as is everything you write. You've brought Sarah to life, even more than she could have been in the book or the movie, and I applaud you for your skill. |
 Jessie Deal 12/10/03 . chapter 5I loved this story. Sad it will not be finished, it could have been more then good |
 if-666 12/6/03 . chapter 5so good- very curious to see what will happen- so UPDATE NOW! PLEASE! AND J/S ACTION! |
 Lady Mirwen 6/29/03 . chapter 5CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE CHAPTERS! |