I have now read this story (what you have) twice now I love pamari it's my Favoret paring in touhou and Alice X marisa is way overdone in my opinion.

I mean I do like Alice and everything but with marisa? Nope!

Well anyway I do hope you Finnish this story, it is just lovely!

Well this was nice and fluffy. I wonder when this will continue if it will. I do enjoy reading how others perceive Patchouli Knowledge as I've been delving into her character as of late. Hope to see more in the future and good luck on your future installments!

Interesting fic I found, this one. I have one planned myself with Pache as the viewpoint character, which may or may not be set in the same story as my other Touhou fic. This gives me some insight as to how other people view her thoughts.

Personally, I think Pache is a little snarkier, but also more curious. And she doesn't hesitate to go outside; it's just that she usually doesn't see the need to.

Still, I mostly like the conflicting thoughts, such as where she's either describing Marisa as quite beautiful just to shoot her down, or when she seemed to be complaining about her presense just to accept her proposal.

What I don't see happening is the fifth chapter, or more precisely, Yukari being forced to do something. Reimu might be able to, if she employs the fierce and feared puppy dog eye technique. Otherwise, no, not really. Mostly I just kept wondering what her plan actually was...

Oh, and I think Koa is spot on. Helpful, but mischievous.

That was a good chapter.*sniff*

I love it. I love Marisa's harem.

I love this ending.

You have done great work here!

Maybe you could make the MarisaxNitori you were planning to make, something to do with more chaotic weapons?

Marisa turning to an ordinary human?

Will she stay in Gensokyo or go in the Outside World?

Ayayaya

I would like to see Patchouli turn into Marisa-ze!

By the way, have you read these novels or do you just know them?

The Time Traveller's Wife seems very tear jerking.

Nicely done work here

That's a nice Patchouli!

Never ever curse!

Until someone dies...

I like the portrayals of Mukyuchouli and Kirisame-ze!

Keep up the awesome work!

Well worth the weight I'd say!

... Holy Luís de Camões, Fernando Pessoa, and all other poets and writers of my country immortal for Fortune and forevermore alive in their truthful words.

MY SOUL COULD NOT KEEP UP WITH THAT EXCHANGE OF QUOTES. And the way it ended, oh my, Oh My, OH MY! Their exchange and matching of wits and feelings was truly a paragon of incomparable genius and budding of such a wonderful story!

Also, I am being way too hammy because I felt like I had to match your eloquence for the entirety of this story, lest I feel inadequate about it.

But know that such declarations are done without a drip of sarcasm! And let us speak plainly, this chapter was delicious to read, and wonderful to enjoy.

I'm loving this story!

Well, THIS is an interesting story! Looking forward to more! :D

Why did you stop writing this? It's a very good story, and I honestly prefer PatchuMari over AliMari. I don't see why you're hating on yourself about how your writing "sucks." I mean yeah, you could use some proofreading, but otherwise the story is great.

Interesting story, with alot of classic ttles. I look forward to the rest.

Nuff said

NOOOOOOOOOO, Patchy, why did u hurt Marisa feelings?

lolz, great story line. awesome crafting it without making the characters go OOC

on a lighter note, what happens when Marisa go to T for twilight?:)

Pretty good so far.

I read Silent Sinner in Blue before and I see what you mean. Her library is extensive, and even if rocket books are specialized, she should have a book on it.

On another note, Yukari did not employ the SDM to come up with a way to get to the moon. She offered to teleport them there. But Remilia, being Remilia decided that it's no fun that way and got her crew to build a rocket instead.

As for Patchouli's personality, hmmm, I think she should be more rude. Like when Marisa praised her, she should maybe say something about praising her won't do any good, what does Marisa really want or something like that. Even though she would secretly like the praise. Also when Patchouli says, "Sure". Maybe have her say, "If it's that important to you, okay." or something similar. Patchouli strikes me as a tsundere.