This is a good story:)

Wow! I normally don't go for Jagan (actually James used to be my least favorite person) but I really like this story! Granted I like all pairings but you really rubbed me closer to Jagan with this yay you! Lol I love Carlos the most in almost all stories (he's present in) so naturally he made me laugh my ass off! Oh so anyways I'm hoping for an eventual update? Please?

awesome story, want to know what happens next, please update soon

woooow AMAZING! I want to know what happened after, update soon please.

This is very cute, I love Jagan XD.

Thanks for writing this espectacular story :D

Excellent job!

LMFAO XD My fave part was "Dude! You can touch yourself when you get home! We have a test tomorrow you know?" Lol Carlos, you win :D

KEEP WRITING YOU LAZY BUTT OF A SISTER :P

Wow I love this so far! You have to continue I want to know what's going on! :) xx

Are you kidding me! How dare you do that to me.. us.. everybody... I loved it but two favors: please update as soon as possible and make them a bit longer so i can take up more time reading in class and look as if i actually read what was assigned.. i plan to re-read your story during literature.

haha cliffys always work xD more more more!

Epic chapter! I live jagan so much! I need more! Update soon!

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I really like your story, first of all the make out seen, hawt! second I love how you described logan's feelings for him, they were so sweet. I can't wait too see where this goes. The only thing is that in my mind the Edge of Desire belongs to Kogan forever and always. But this is still really good

hahahaaha that was funny xD yeah I wanna know what happends next! but its also a good one shot, its up to you xD

Wow! What's going to happen? Will the forbidden lovers ever get there justice? so many question to ask and yet such little time for them to be answered

You should continue, I'll totally read and review it! :D

Oh ok, "I have a research paper due, so I need the computer" AND YOU CALL ME THE LIAR? XPPPPPPPP

Lol jk sister dear, I like you're raging hormoneS xD

Continue! Like, NOW! lol ]

I loved this! I loved how much they made out... I actually found it sweet. But now I have to know what's going to happen to James.

I hope you continue, and if you do, update soon! ]