Amazing!Your fanfic made me forget that I'm team Ash while reading got me to the point of being confused will I choose now? Anyway, your story weaved through the Iron Queen smoothly without you worrying about lost plots and the like. Keep it up!

Yay! . This really helped me get into the right mood for tonight's performance of my high school's musical, Once Upon a Matress! I'm a girl, but I play one of two jesters! I needed some inspiration after doing two performances of it already! Thank you! And what great writing!

i like this chapter!

I like your writing style - its very smooth and has good voice and word choice :) It makes me want to keep reading although I can't because I haven't finished the last book yet!