Sweetness!

Excellent! These are delightfully sensitive character studies. You obviously care about the main characters a lot and have thought about them plenty. Thanks for this intriguing cycle.

well this was awesome.

seriously, they were short and sweet and to the point, but so very /them/. and tbh i can't even pick a favorite because they were all pretty amazing, but...yeah, i can't pick. twilight's was particularly beautiful, though. and the end of dash's made me smile.

so, AWESOME, and write more?)

I really like this one, and can relate more than just a bit. Somtimes people, no matter how quiet, efficent, and hard working you are just want to let loose a bit. I think that's probably why I always end up as evil whenever I play anything that lets me. I love the images of what she wants to do and be, they are very visceral, and I especially love the frozen water one. The last lines are my favorite, and wrap things up very nicely.

The last line... im something of a cynic by now, so i see it this way... plans never materialise, that's why they are plans and not something that you are doing right now.

Then maybe, at least she has opened up a vista for herself, maybe those ponies who work hard and blind, once when open their eyes, move their haunches too. maybe those who wake up late, wake up for the better. or maybe...im on my fool's trip again.

It's nice spending time with the people who know and care about you, and allow you to be yourself no matter who you are, and I can only imagine that the joy and relaxation caused by people such as these only increases the more of a public figure you become.

I think most of us can relate to the feeling of inadaquacy, of looking around and seeing just how much other people are doing and acomplishing, and feeling like nothing you've done can measure up to that. I like the fact that Rarity doesn't place the blame on anyone for her feelings and takes steps to make a change instead of just wallowing in self pity. It's also good to see how sometimes things that seem small or simple can be all it takes to change someone's world view, and it's nice for her to see herself as strong and confident at the end.

No, I haven't seen the My Little Ponies series this is based on, I have to admit my knowledge ends at the 80's series, movies, plastic ponies, travel case, castle, and sticker collection, but I will have to check it out.

you inspire me to write...for good or bad, i'll be joining your brethren soon... soon before long

The episode Cutie Mark Chronicles apparently shows that Rarity and by extension Sweetie Belle are Ponyville natives. And of course, in the Pilot episode, Rarity said she always wanted to live in Canterlot. So canonically, Rarity can't be from Canterlot.

But damn, your story is awesome anyway!

I adore these stories.

Words cant explain how calming these stories are. Ready for the rest. I was so pissed at dumbass writers on this site and I read these stories and I felt very soothed. Thank-you.

Words cant explain how calming these stories are. Ready for the rest.

I love the images evoked by this one, I can almost see the land where she grew up, and the feelings of entrapment and isolation she felt. I love the images you use to describe the way her new friends have become part of her heart and life, beautiful and simple.

For me this does a good job capturing the conflicted feelings of love and envy older sisters feel for younger ones, especially if there is any sort of an age gap.

wow, i kinda feel like applejack right now!

my first proper job and i find myself longing for the lazy, slow and long days...

but im done!

its night, in fact young morning, and im all set to become apple bloom again! (only except the male version!
..hehe, forgot the review part...but u know its good. one just has to feel it.