Mmmmm, yes. Their hypothetical conversation was great. And the aftermath, well ... that was HAWT, as Bella might say.

Great one-shot, lovie!

After falling madly and frustratingly in love with your X-Files crossover, I decided the prudent thing to do next was to get familiar with your UE series. Starting with this adorable prologue...

You've got a new devoted fan! :D

i wasn't quite expecting a 'retelling' of chap 20, but i loved it! what i especially adored was how well you show edward's range of emotions. i swooned when he swaggered. i teared up when he teared up after she said yes. he was playful, anxious, eager, nervous, sad, ecstatic, sexy, lusty. all those wonderful 'in love' emotions!

plus the bit of schmexin in this was just titillatingly perfect.

thank you for writing. am off to next chapter in the series!

funny and sweet. way better than the negotiations in Eclipse... and thats my fav book of all

Cute without being saccharine!

Reb

"Before shutting the door, Carlisle gave us two thumbs-up." - Best Carlisle EVER. Just sayin.

This story was phenomenal!

I really liked the different spin on the engagement and that night. It was very sweet and very funny to read. I really enjoyed it. Great job.

They were so adorable in that chapter. Loved it.

I really loved this. I love playful Edward. I hope this turns into a full story.

If this was facebook it would "like" it :)

I stupidly put this on the back burner to read. Should have known better. Excellent, as is all you do.

OMD i love it i couldn't stop smiling and i love the nickname Mocha-chino awesome XD

okay ... epic! - When a woman says something is 'fine', it isn't.

So true! I liked this fic cause it's just sooo classic! Edward is Mr Repressed and Bella is a horny teenager.

I just think, the part where Bella elaborated about how she actually wanted to get married, but always said she didn't could have been more detailed. Loved the references and the proposal. I think in the beginning their relationship was the simplest, there were only few issues to deal with, like the Bella Edward awkwardness.

Gave me a lot of delighted chuckles!