I'm wary of poetry, but this is lovely. The way every second line rhymes, instead of every line, makes it seem almost like an old-fashioned saga or ballad. I don't know anything about poetry, but I know what I like.

Once again, simply marvelous. So deep and striking. So very very deep and beautiful.

TT_TT oh god, i love ur work...so sweet...please, continue writing your beautiful works of art...these fan fics are just beautiful...TT_TT beautiful man...**sniffle hurray for shounen ai!