Please update soon

i like this story in lots of others she takes edward back in this one she had a back bone edwards to overprotective

I don't get the meaning of this "I'm sure we'll lose to you next time," Bella assured her with an easygoing grin" sentence.

Omg plzz continue the story

this is soo good. you should make a story with this. this is awesome

What's going to happen next? Are Bella and Percy really going to be together in this story? I hope you update soon please.

U should continue instead of making it a one shot it was brilliant, o and u should make it a Bella Percy pairing. I love those but there's not many of them

This one-shot was really good! Any thought on expanding it to a full multi-chap story?

HOLY CRAP! This story is SOO GOOD! Please keep writing it because I would love to continue reading this fanfic.

IT'S AWESOME! :)

Ohh i love this. Please write more. can you make this into a full story? Please!

What story did this take place in beause I've never seen Bella act that mad at Edward. I really like the one-shot

POST MORE NOW PLZ! I love this new Bella as a demi-god she rocks!

I looove this story please update good job please please please update i love this story

I love your story...It's amazing...:)

don't let bella easerlie forgive the cullans and please don't let her get back with edward he's condisending or alice bella farther gave her the neckless and alice turned it to dusk she has no consideration for bellas feelings.