this wonderful so cute tell your sis that ok ? also you did a wonderful job writing it.

don't worry this was a great romantic scene. I love it.

Aww! What a sweet little fic... you and your sis are a great Viko writers, write another!

Kawaii...but, there so young! o_o; Yume

Awwww! Viko 4 eva! I really liked this fic. In fact, I'm almost ashamed I didn't come up with it first.(There were grammar problems, Rusty
So? It's the thought that counts, stupid.(I have feelings too, you know.
Oh, I'm sorry.(You should be
Great fic! Please check out my Viko fics if you haven't already. I've been told they rock the world. Keep up the good work!(What he said
Rusty and Insane Rusty

Forgive? What's to forgive? This fic is great!

How old are they? If they're young that reminds me of SS err...another couple! If they're older how KAWAIIIII!

On the part they're on the boat I just wanted to start singing, "THISSSSSSS IS THE NIIIGHT" uhh "its a beauutttiifuull night and they call it.." italian something...! WRITE MORE! Yume

Man this is a funny humor/romance Viko fic. Please continue

very very cute! hehe your storys are a lot more romantic then any of mine! well done! write more!

Elvina

ohhhhh how cute! i like it! i like it! Vivi started out as my favorite character, but nows he about my 3rd, but i still love storys about him!

Elvina