I thought the story was very amusing! But of course not everything goes exactly as planned. Yuki ALWAYS has to be the aggressive one doesn't he. :D

That was hilarious; I love how Yuki interfered with his inappropriateness w

Mama continued. "The prince looked at the piece of paper and said it was... ... ... sigh... crap. And at that moment, the angel was so angry with him, he decided to follow the prince until he admitted he was wrong. Little did the prince and the angel realize that they would fall in love with each other. And upon knowing this they..."

"They fucked each other for hours."

I burst out laughing at that part. Good job XD

Leather & Whips..

Yuki Leather/Whips Shuichi 3!

xD

Seriously though, cute story! Yuki, with his pottymouth and bluntness makes me giggle. This was perfect in character imo.

Great job.

Now, maybe you should write the story about the the whips..

Haha j/k!

..maybe.

8D

this was a hilarious! story! lolz i was bursting out laughing the entire time! a valuable lesson to learn indeed! lolz

Lol Poor Riku will forever be scared. Lol loved this! Yuki is such a bad parent.

This was hilarious! Loved it!

I had to laugh because it was a funny story and I needed it because I was having a bad morning Thank You.

aybe you could make a sequel to it.

very funny! :D