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| Destruction God 2006-11-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseWah! That is so sad! This story definately needs a sequel. I normally don't even read Sorcerer Hunter fics, but this one was just too good after my all day marathon of Sorcerer Hunters and Spell Wars. And yes, the name did come from the final episode, straight from Carrot's mouth. "He's my Destruction God and you can't have him." Write more! |
| Aoi Me 2004-08-02 ch 1, | abuseTruth be told, I've never read Hamlet and I don't know much about it at all. And now, due to this story, I'm not sure whether or not I want to. Part of me wants to rush out and find it, hoping it's just like this was, but the other part doesn't want to have to read something equally as tragic. In some ways, I can't understand Marron's final reasoning, but I still see why he chose to end things, so, I'm pretty much nothing but contradictions, ne? |
| Rae Shap 2002-11-08 ch 1, | abuseThat was sooooo good! I love your stories! The twist at the end was fantastic... the story about the General... I could see the characters going through the motions of the story... beautiful! That was fan-bloody-tastic! ^_^ |
| Hobie 2002-05-29 ch 1, | abuseWhy can't Marron be bi? gateau and mirufi are. |
| Jennifer 2002-04-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseI don't often post reviews that much, but I have to know because I'm using all my strength to keep from bursting into tears. I think I've only done that three thimes at the end of a story. So I want to say thank you for writing a story that is so moving and so full of feeling even though it was such a sad story. |
| Aeris 2002-04-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseWere you watching Crouching Tiger Hidden Dragon before you wrote the end of this?? ^.- Loved it, I laughed, I cried, I made the little bug-eyed in shock face. Superb Aeris |
| Lady Athena 2002-04-04 ch 1, | abuseOh my lord! That was immaculate! So immaculate that it's going straight to my fav stories! Fantastic, brilliant! |
| Lin-san and The Crossdresse... 2002-04-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis question is haunting the nation: ***Where did you dig up this fic?*** Crossdresser-san: Could the following be an example of the possible cause? :: Lin-san enters the room wearing an archealogical/excavation hat, knee socks, and a pic axe:: Crossdresser-san: Say hi Lin-san! Lin-san: Ohio. That is where I am from. Yes, Ohio. ::Lin-san walks toward a rusty airplane, set in a deserted field:: Crossdresser-san: This is Lin-san in knee socks. They're purple. Yea! I like purple. This is a rusty old airplane. Bad, airplane, bad. This is Lin-san in her purple knee socks going to a remote location. Bye, Lin-san, bye. ::Waves to the writer-san:: ::1,000,000,000 hours later:: Crossdresser-san: Look writer-san! Here comes Lin-san. Hi, Lin-san, Hi... ::Lin-san exits the plane; she stumbles over the last step and falls on her face:: Lin-san: Ack! Why you piece of M@(^&*^%% F*(^&*^^&$^ S&^$!!!!!!!!! Crossdresser-san: Lin-san, I know how much you hate this fic, but please try to keep the review clean of the germs that this story gives off. Chocolate? Marron? Chocolate AND Marron?!!!!!!! Lin-san: Eureka! I've found it. ::Lin-san licks the gum off of the runway of the airport. Underneath lies this fic:: Crossdresser-san: Thank you. Say goodbye Lin-san. Lin-san ::around a mouth of peppermint and dirt flavoured gum:: Bye-bi! |
| xenagirl70 2002-04-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseI LOVED this fic (except for the ending, poor Marron!). I expecially loved the way you used figurative language along with a realistic slang to give the entire story a good bout of beliveability. Way to go!! |
| Sorcerer Huntress 2002-04-02 ch 1, | abuseFala, you made me cry.... That was sooooooo sad... I liked it... I hope you know, that i was suppose to be planning stuff for my B-day, but now I'm too depressed...(that's a good thing! I can be lazy now!! ^_^) ~*^*~Cafe Latte |
| Shaynie 2002-04-02 ch 1, | abuse*sniff* Bye Marron *waves* Well. no actually. Yeah Gatteron. I liked it Fala (wait, wait, you get that everytime I read one of your stories...adn guess what I won't even mention that it's shoenen-ai ACK..sorry) I liked it but, no offence, I did perfere your other ones where you focused on Gateau and Marron more. There were times it seemed a bit jumpy, but I did like it. Though I think Marron should've worn the necklace before he *ahem* Again. Awesomeness. Have fun! |
| Mage 2002-04-01 ch 1, anon. | abuse*sobs* Aww man... you made me cry ;_; *whines* that's so... so... sad! |
| Shini no Miko 2002-04-01 ch 1, | abuseHey, sweetie. I absolutely love this story. It's so sad, but... It makes me glad, for some reason... I'm so glad to see this... I guess the only word I can really come up with is "Development"... Your version of the Hunters... They've grown up a lot, and I really like the way you've written them in your recent fics. Congratulations on another wonderful story. |
| Maxy Steel 2002-04-01 ch 1, | abuse*sits quietly for a long period of time* Wow. That was... deep, yet confusing. I need to congratulate you on that. It's rare that I find a non-humor fic that doesn't confuse me. The very last part was the most confusing. Why did Marron do that? I mean, I can see him being hurt and all that towards Carrot for a while, but not enough to do that. Especially when he and Gateau had just gotten it together. If you've got a minute, would ya mind mailin' me and explaining the reasoning to me? *puppy eyes* And you are aware that this calls for a sequel, right? *grins* Not bad, Fala. Little confusing, but actually rather good. One little tiny thing though... Chocolate has blue eyes, and wears a blue jacket. Just thought you might like to know. But hey, keep writing, I like your stuff! Catch ya later! Luv ya all! -Maxy Steel |
| Lady Cianyin 2002-04-01 ch 1, | abuseI wondered what you meant by light suicide. Not a bad story, but I really didn't understand the ending. It seemed kind of senseless to me. |