|Reviews for Five Times Red John got Conveniently Killed Off|
| MessengerOfDreams 5/13/12 . chapter 1
Favorited mostly for the ACME part. That was brilliant. The rest was great but I absolutely loved the ACME section.
| Lothlorien Aeterna 9/14/11 . chapter 1
| Arianna Elizabeth Jackson 7/31/11 . chapter 1
wow. those were amazing. I laughed out loud at the lightning (though i love the idea) and absolutley adore the last one...killed by a serial killer? Thats so perfects...
| TeresaAmaliaJane 6/30/11 . chapter 1
I loved these little stories, especially the last one. It made me so happy...I've had dreams about that happening. Sigh...wouldn't it just be wonderful if Red John did die conveniently...
| ab89us 6/6/11 . chapter 1
LMAO! This is hilarious!
| PineapplePsychic 6/2/11 . chapter 1
XD he hot struck by lightning XD
| Kuhlama 5/24/11 . chapter 1
As I wish it would have been one of those ...
- Great story idea :)
| Holla 5/19/11 . chapter 1
That was amazing!
| CSI4lyfNCIS13 5/6/11 . chapter 1
Its divine intervention. The hand of God. Whatever you wanna call it. Great fic!
| LAurore 5/4/11 . chapter 1
I liked it ! I love Red John put on a bus lol What karma lol
Nice fic ! ;)
| Chiisana Minako 5/3/11 . chapter 1
FINALLY I got to read this! University got in the way, in EVERY way possible. And I have limited time to write this review, which I deeply, deeply hate _
Anyway, I better not waste it.
Before I forget, I caught two typos:
"[..]Bu when they reached the CBI[..]"
"[..]Hedidn't know what he'd have done if[..]"
This was so hilarious -for the most part- I'm glad I was alone reading, since I can be very loud when I'm laughing -especially if it's the surprised laughter kind, which most of the time, was :P
The ACME bit was probably my favorite. I mean, the way he WENT TO HIDE IN THE BUSHES. Childhood!flashback! And the feather. OMG. I was laughing so hard. You'd think that doesn't happen in real life ;)
And Jane's final comment? xDD Now I WANT to hear him say meep meep for whatever reason. Or, you know, make him say it in a drawing xD. Hilarious.
If I had to guess, I'd say the third one was for Grace ;)
(Oh, and I actually had to google it xD.)
I loved the dynamic of the fourth one, it was really easy to imagine, I mean, Jane being in the middle of them; like when you're a kid and another is chasing you and you run around a table and you mirror the other's position so you can't be caught :P (another childhood!flashback, may I add). Of course Jane wouldn't keep quiet, and Lisbon wouldn't want to take a chance that big by shooting. But the end? xD When you mentioned a road, I thought it might be!
Oh yes, the wonders of public transportation
The last one was.. I don't know how to classify it. In a way it was very clean and concise, in another one left so many details that can say a lot more. I loved that you included Hightower, and her concern towards Lisbon and Jane. I know you're not HT's biggest fan, but you made an excellent work of portraying her.
The fact that Lisbon didn't want him to have free time because he would be all alone and miserable was somehow incredibly cute and incredibly Lisbon, at the same time. She does care so much I kinda loved that she mentioned they could watch something stupid on TV. That's really how it works when you're feeling down :)
The ocassional use of first names, the last part, it all fit so well. This can't be okay in a couple of hours. But somehow, he's gone pretty good progress, mainly because of her, and I just... swoon
THANK YOU FOR THIS! My plotbunny throwing powers are getting better ;)!
| Frogster 5/3/11 . chapter 1
That was funny! The first ones, anyway. The last one I found more serious, though, but I really liked that one.
I must say my personal favorite was the ACME dynamite one, especially when Jane made the "meep meep" comment.
Although, the one where RJ dies of dysentery was a good one too. It made me think of the Oregon Trail game from elementary school. Someone should put RJ in that game so we could shoot him along with the buffalo, or so he could get snake bit and die that way. (Is it wrong to want a serial killer to die, regardless of whether he's a fictional character or not?)
Love, love Lisbon's concern and loyalty in the last one. And love how Jane's willing to lean on her.
Write more soon!
| erica83ca 5/2/11 . chapter 1
ACME - ROFL - and I had to look up dysentery and now I have a serious case of the giggles so thank you for that!
| Ebony10 5/2/11 . chapter 1
Those were great! I really liked how you had a serious one (the last one), but honestly I love parodies. hehe:
"And speaking of lightning, do you think we could have this conversation in the stairwell. I'd really rather not get struck myself."
Oh man, that was just perfect! I'll be rereading this one.
| bloodyhell95 5/1/11 . chapter 1
Fucking. Awesome. Dysentery? BRILLIANT.