That finale was beautiful. Just lovely.

nice short story

Really good. Too bad it is a one shot. Would be interesting if the story continued.

cute

Absolutely ridiculous. And I loved it, it was great!

Very charming. Nasu had some potential with Ayako, but didn't have the time to properly utilize her. It is a sad thing, but seeing someone write this little shot shows that some other people also see the potential. Thank you.

And I have to say, nawww...

Shirou is an idiot with stunts like that, but because of it he is so lovable, no?

Embarrassing? I don't see how this could possibly be embarrassing. I loved it. The second I realized they were doing an archery competition, I knew how it was going to end, though in my mind, Shirou was a bit less obvious.

this was really good... i wish there would be an "ayako route" in the VN, on another note this is the first story in which ayako is the protagonist that i have found...

I've always wished FSN had more routes. Sad.

yay, love this couple, thx for making this fic...

I liked the story very much, and your way of setting the events was done in an amusing matter. The 'confession' at the beginning really brought

a smile to my face because of how well done it was orchestrated. The characters felt convincing enough and the ending was delightful.

Of course, Ayako being my favorite character adds another point, but, you know...

Take care and may you continue finding joy in writing,

Traingham...

Accurate and entertaining! Great fic! :D

I loved it. There aren't nearly enough Ayako fics out there. And this one is so nicely done. Good stuff.