I luv your story plz write more

tut tut Rachel should have worn some clothes. Amazing story by the way, I cant wait for the next update.

C'omon! Updaaate!

I am indeed rather intrigued by this rather riveting tale my little bean. I would be greatly overjoyed if you continued.

The story proves to be interesting overall. Despite possessing slight hints of common science fiction installments such as Star Wars, there's still a sense of unique writing.

There is no way of articulating how awsome this story is. So I won't even try.

I hate cliffhangers... The story is really heating up and I can't wait for the next chapter

I'm really enjoying how the story's going! You've set out the characters very well, and I'm really interested to see where the story takes them. Keep up the good work!

Duuuude you rule. I can't wait for the next chapter. But I do belive that Leon and Rachel should have a magical rainbow sleepover, teehee that be the highness talking

So far the story is rock'n'rolling! Pelease update more often!

Wow! This is a great story! Please keep updating, I'm want to read more!

Awesomeness. This archive needs a story in which the grox aren't slaughtered mindlessly by other aliens. This is a great moment for this realm ruled by nerd-boys! With their stories of spaceship battles and uptight space captains. Ugh. Anyways I cant wait for the next chapter.

You're awesome.

So you're getting a grox-face from me: ( _O)

Yes, this ugly typed out figure shows just how much I'm intrigued by this story.

-Lady Bloomingtile Heston

Wow, this story is going to be awsome. It also has that fluency of grammar and spelling that makes it just so much more intriguing. I hope that you carry on writing this.

A promising start to a story! Your descriptions are very well detailed, and the storyline looks to be quite unique. I'm interested to see how it will progress!