Ohh, this is a fantastic part of fanfiction! Gotta love your sinister Ranma He reminds me so much of Xellos and Ichimaru Gin (bleach). And such amusing Ramna fics are truly scarce. I do hope you keep updating!

Another great chapter to this fic.
It's wonderful to see that you have updated it, Carrot. I'd feared you'd abandoned it for good. This is one of the more original Ranma fics that you've done. Good job and I hope to see you update it sometime soon.
As always, you have an excellent narrative voice throughout. Grammar is solid (Though there were a few bobbles here and there
One thing that needs fixing however is the scene with Ranma And Mousse. It's terribly confusing in regards to what is going on in it.
One moment Ranma is handing him a coin, the next he's pressing his palm to Mousse's head, and the next moment I'm not sure what is going on or how Mousse's eyes did anything.
I'd suggest you clarify that section or do something with it to clean it up.
All in all though... a very good chapter.

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Sweet story, I'm loving every moment of it. The subtle crossover of Ranma, and Slayers is genius, without having it be to much of a cross over. I'm curious of how Ranma became a mazoku? if that's what he is, anyway it's an awesome story and i find myself smiling while I read it. Truely a work of art.

Cool chapter, can't wait to read more.

This story is just so Awesome! Although, I've never liked calling the Mazoku like Xellos 'monsters'. It's just too generic and doesn't show the proper change of threat level from run-of-the-mill monsters like trolls and the like and Mazoku which are way above and beyond them.

I do wonder what happened to Akane and Nabiki though... They just sort of trailed off mid sentence and followed Ono with zombie like obedience when he came across them. Was it something that they realized that rocked their world? Something they saw that they couldn't before? Well whatever, this story has been great! I look forward to the coming chapters! Keep up the awesome work!

Carrotglace,

...Well, this is my first time stumbling upon your story, and perhaps I'm quite lucky, since I can somewhat avoid being stymied by what was apparently an exceedingly long time between these last two chapters, hmm?

Either way, quite the impressive story that you've got here. grammatically and spelling wise, you maintain a high quality, and I've always enjoyed that. Also though, is the compelling tale that you tell, that holds the reader's attention from start to finish.

You've truly done a fine job here, and I eagerly await any further chapters that you decide to write.

Fenraellis

Interesting fic! I'll be waiting for your next update! I hope it'll keep on getting more interesting.

"Ryoga Hibiki had just spent his soul on a can of soda,

literally."AUG

GH!
SWETO!

That was so coolzz!

Utterly swet :D This is awesome! Wish I could plan out nefarious plots, it'd make my stories so much better\

so ranmas a mazoku

It lives! Seriously, thanks for updating this. I love this story, as I also really like Slayers. I do wonder where Ryoga is now though... Hm, is he the counterpart for Zelgadis?

Cool.

Awesome, glad to see this is being continued XD

interesting