 Rashaka 4/1/02 . chapter 1You deserve a few more reveiws for this- its creative and different, and that's worth reading, always. Some parts were confusing, but it understandable, because it fits the narrator's POV. I liked the Narrator. I loved"What if... baby... where... oof...(at least that's how my conscious mind translated. That night I had a dream about silver bullets-that was GREAT. So THAT'S how the average mind of a person in Sunnydale works... Good job here, though I must say I didn't understand the title- what's Sunnydale's Eleventh Commandment? You didn't explain it. |