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JamesLuver 10/6/11 . chapter 14
I really enjoyed this last chapter and the way in which you resolved everything. I especially enjoyed Giovanni's back story, that was a great way of explaining the events. The Jessie/James stuff was adorable as usual and I had to roll my eyes at Ash at the end. Typical of him!
JamesLuver 10/2/11 . chapter 13
Ash has redeemed himself by saving Jessie and James. I was terrified that they might die, but that fear was quickly put to bed. I liked the interactions with the twerps in this chapter, as well as the interaction between Jessie and James. :D
JamesLuver 9/26/11 . chapter 12
Wow, that was dramatic! Ash was pretty harsh here. I kind of stopped feeling sorry for him. I just hope Jessie and James will be okay!
JamesLuver 9/20/11 . chapter 11
I was worried that Ash might do something to Meowth in order to stop him from telling Jessie and James. Glad to see that I was wrong about that.

Jessie and James finally getting together made my evening. Perfect. :3
JamesLuver 9/18/11 . chapter 10
The great thing about this chapter is the fact that although I really don't like Ash for what he did, I can't help but feel sorry for him, too. That's a rarity for me, so kudos for that!

Jessie and James' exchange was rather sweet. I loved how Jessie didn't want to get separated from James again. :3
JamesLuver 9/16/11 . chapter 9
Wait...ASH pushed Jessie! Well, I wasn't expecting that at all! :O I'm glad that he slipped up there, though, as I didn't want Meowth to not believe James. And dang, I thought Jessie and James might kiss at the end of this chapter. Oh well, guess I'll hsve to hope that they get it together soon!
JamesLuver 9/15/11 . chapter 8
I'm glad that Jessie, James and Meowth were able to sort out their problems and that Jessie forgives James. :D That really cheered me up.
JamesLuver 9/5/11 . chapter 7
Poor James,it must've been terrible for him to tell Meowth what he thought was the truth, and just as tough for Meowth to hear it.

But yay! Jessie and James are reunited! :D
JamesLuver 8/30/11 . chapter 6
I'm glad that Jessie is feeling stronger now. And I can't wait for her to find James and confront him about what happened. Poor James, I feel so sorry for him. And Mondo is just so cute. :3
JamesLuver 8/24/11 . chapter 5
It was strange seeing Giovanni being sensitive to James and Meowth's feelings, but I really liked the reasons why he was acting like that, they seemed very much IC. :D I'm glad that Jessie is still living! Hope James and Meowth find that out soon!
JamesLuver 8/23/11 . chapter 4
I feel so sorry for both Jessie and James. The words that they exchanged were terrible, especially since they didn't mean it. And I can't believe that James would push Jessie off the bridge, no matter how angry he was with her! I can't wait to read the next chapter.
JamesLuver 8/21/11 . chapter 3
I'd guessed that the TRio were going to fail their mission, but I was completely hopeful about it at the beginning, especially since their plan seemed to be working much better than usual. The bomb going off in their faces really put a damper on things, though.
On another note, I couldn't stop laughing at Brock being attracted to James-in-drag. xD A great chapter.
JamesLuver 8/19/11 . chapter 2
I love the way Jessie stuck up for James against the Boss. But I wonder what goes so wrong for James to try and kill Jessie... Great chapter, I really enjoyed the way you built the tension up.
JamesLuver 8/18/11 . chapter 1
This was a very intriguing first chapter. Sounds like James tried to kill Jessie? D: I'm glad that Jessie is still alive though, even if James doesn't know that yet. It's obvious that he regrets whatever he did, so I'm looking forward to the two of them reuniting.
Ligerstardust 7/17/05 . chapter 4
NO! WHY? Why would James do that?
Great story. It's explained well. I hope that they get back together. Keep on writting!
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