|Reviews for Across the River|
| R 3/10/12 . chapter 2
| THEJN 8/4/11 . chapter 1
moar moar! :D thanks for writing this!
| Assassin Aisha 6/25/11 . chapter 2
*KNOCK*KNOCK* Hey, i was just wondered...WHERE ARE YOU? I REALLY WANT THIS STORY TO CONTINUE PLZ. PLZPZLPZLZ UPDATE AS SOON AS U CAN CUZ I'VE BEEN LOOKING FOR A GOOD OC/OC APPERNTICE STORY ON FANFICTION FOR QUITE THE TIME AND NOW I FINALLY FOUND ONE BUT THE SAD THING IS...UR NOT UPDATING. SO PLZ READ THIS REVIEW AND UPDATE BECUZ THIS IS A REALLY GOOD STORY.
| animevideogame freak 6/5/11 . chapter 2
i like it so far please keep going
| hello 5/2/11 . chapter 1
if you stop this i will kill you keep writing this is awesome
| from.cali.with.love 5/2/11 . chapter 1
This is really cute. :3
The plot has a lot of potential and I didn't find any spelling/grammer errors. However your use of Italian is annoying at times. A word here and there - I think - could be a lot more tolerable than full sentences.
Good prolouge. I will definitly keep watching this story.