JANES PRAGNATE? OMG!

I don't want to sound like a bee-atch, but please consider using spell check and grammar check. And on the plot itself, I haven't seen Crossroads, but it looks to me like you basically copied the movie word for word. This fic might have had potential if it was a satire of the movie (especially if there was Britney-bashing in it) and you kept Daria and everyone else in character. (Oh yeah, and what in God's name were you thinking having Daria sing Britney Spears songs?) Better luck next time.

I'm sorry, but when I read this I was literally yellig "Crap, crap I tell you, crap! Who the hell wrote this!". I liked the movie, but this was way too cheesy. I couldn't handle it. No more Britney Spears crossovers for you. In fact, don't listen to Britney Spears while you're writing, or don't listen to her at all. She has the power to turn your brain and writing to crap.

sincerely, Simon Cowles acomplice

i saw crossroads and loved it! Daria is also one of my favorite show so i thought it was cool you wrote a crossover like that. your probably the first to write about that! Don't mind what other people say. it was good and you know it lol! Bye!

Just to be fair it was the stupid microsoft works that cut off some of my words (that explains mispelling Daria as Dare) And as i said if you do a parody the characters will be out of character. Now please, could you people just get through the spelling and read the story. If you don't like the story say that you don't just don't pay attention to the stupid spelling.

Oh god, *please* tell me this was a parody. I mean re-doing Crossroads with characters from Daria isn't a bad idea, but the spelling and formatting is *so* bad, I just assumed you were doing it purposefully for comedic effect. The dialog when Daria, Jodie, and Jane meet up again is (perhaps unintentionally?) hilariously bad. And how many ways can someone accidentally misspell pregnant? (Please repeat after me: p-r-e-g-n-a-n-t) And "unconchience" for unconscious is a real stretch. Heck, at one point you actually misspell Daria as "Dare." If this is meant as a parody, then: good job. If this is *not* meant as parody, then: good idea, but please proofread. Bad grammar and spelling distract from what could be a good story. Oh, and (I know this is hardc.) try to keep the dialog and the way the characters act faithful to what we've seen of them on the series.

not to sound mean, cause it was ok, but you should really consider a beta-reader

Nickel's worth of free advice get someone to check over your spelling and grammar. If you go to the message board at .com/message_ and ask for beta-readers, you will get volunteers.

oh my god! that was so clever to do a Daria/ Crossroads crossover! Those are my 2 favorite things j/k but i like your story a lot! keep writing!