This was amazing. A really interesting idea and well-executed.

Ok, that was great. David reminds me of Jack and can't wait for more! Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease!)

This truly was amazing and I hope you will right a sequel or prequel.

You are an amazing talented writer and you should always know that you are supported. Seriously well done and don't stop writing. You are one of the best!

Is there one more chapter? I really hope David has changed and will be ok.

Why don't I trust him? That clone is up to something.

Can River just have one minute alone with the clone? He needs the shit kicked out of him!(Between you and me, Alan, John and Adam would want to beat the hell out of him! That is no way to treat someone!)

Really interested to see where you'll go with this.

But remember, I want to see Dupe Doc get his come'uppence. If it's not the Doctor's doing, then let it at least be River. Please.

But no bitchfights...

OMG x2 this was so amazing, please update soon!

Every time I see you've updated this fic, I squeal! I'm really loving it!

BRILLIANT

Please,Please,Please let River kill him in the end, I would like to see his face blown into a thousand billion pieces by her Alpha Meson gun!
If anyone hit my girlfriend, I would kill them without thinking, I want either Rory or River to kill him.

P.S this has got me angry... Well done! It takes a real author to do that.

This. Is. Fantastic.

I've seen so many Rose/TenII stories and this is a real breath of fresh air from all that lovesick gooey stuff XD Your writing is fantastic and your characters very IC. I must admit, when I read 'Astra' I was thinking it would be Astrid. I also freely admit that when I found out it was Rose, I considered stopping reading because I don't generally like Doctor/Rose reunion fic (can you say done to death?) But I'm so glad I kept reading because this story is so wonderful! I can totally picture Valeyard!TenII sitting in his chair, looking all badass. Keep up the awesome! :D

Ahhhh! This is so exciting, keep writing you amazingly brilliant writer!

That was crackalacking! Yeah that's my word!

Oh this just gets better. You are obviously a amazing writer, keep it up!

I'll be waiting, my little cabbage cabbage?

Love the story so far!

Katie x