your writing gets better with every chapter. This was hilarious I love that Ashlyn in here, will the twins be too?

That was funny as hell u need to continue

Alicia! WEOW! I agree with you about Kanes door. Good insight about that. Please write more...soon...now...

omg, the more i read the better it gets. still can't wait to find out what happens between torin and shelbi. and now with kane. do hope you continue to write. i see you wrote more this time, im so happy. great job.

Will Aylce ever be able to touch Torin? She seems frightening maybe she can threaten the Gods into making it so. Poor Paris:( I hope he finds Siennea when he's sad I'm sad. Go Alicia tackle Kane to the ground! UPDATE SOON with LONGER chapters because this is BRILLIANT.

this is so awesome, i wish you would make the chapsters longer it would be noce. but grate story, cant wait to hear more about abby and torin. :) good work.

awesome. a gang of girls into the life of the lords should be continue.

Amazing! As usual ;)