Hello!

I've read your other story, Never Too Young for Love, I believe and when I came across this one, I felt the need to read it. So I did.
There was one mistake I noticed. When Megan finished delivering the child, you said it was a boy when it was obvious it was girl (Crystal)... Other than that, I did enjoy this one-shot, for I've never been the biggest fan of the one-shots people produce—so kudos to you.
Anywho, the story brought tears into my eyes; did I cry? No. But there was some emotion in me. I was a little sad. So, I must give you props, EssaTheTwerp, because I rarely experience sadness when I read stories posted on Fanfiction. And, obviously, your story did.
All together, beautifully written, one minor mistake, and I overall loved the plot and how it was directed on Brady. You never disappoint, do you? Ha-ha.
Guess that's it! Looking forward into whatever else you post or if you're going to...

Cheers! )

Awwnn

This was just so fuckig cute and perfect!

Loved it essa!

I think that child imprints are the best, hence why I just had two on my fic... *snickers* good things are scarce
So now I'm gonna take a well deserved nappy and after I wake up.. Imma gonna read ut mail and ur LJ message and respond P
Muakk!

Eeep! I love this. I'm a huge Brady fan and you've made me love him a hundred times more :D

I also love how you wrote his entire life story in short sentences and managed to pull it off. The way that they worked with each other while still be independent was awesome
Great spelling/punctuation/word choice. No mistakes, besides a misplaced semicolon or two
Great job!

Aly &hearts

Gah! The ending made me choke up a little. You did such a wonderful job with this, essawolf! *hugs and spins around* The sadness and the sacrifice mixed with the love and the hope...just so wonderful. Thank you for sharing!

Mel