I'M GETING A HEAD ACHE trying to comprehend some of this p.s arashi is naruto and hinata's son isn't he

Hey how are you? I'm a definite fan of Naru/Hina fanfiction and also Dr. Who. You fanfic is extremely well written and I'm loving your story. The way you have written this fanfic does have that strange "timey wimey, whibbley wobbly" Dr. Who twist, which might I add is very well done. I literally feels like a Steven Molfet or a Russell T. Davis Dr. Who episode. To sum it all up your fanfic is one of the best I read in a long time. I even converted it into an ebook format so I can read it on my phone. Please keep up the good work and put out more chapters.

Is the clock responsible for the disruptions to the fabric of reality? Also, were the references to RosarioVampire intentional?

I searched for the soundtrack of Silent Hill to listen to while reading this chapter. It fits quite well.

Is Hana Sakura's kid (and maybe Sasuke's)? And Arashi Naruto and Hinata's? (Or possibly their grandchildren?)

Keep going!

I still wonder if mccoy figures out that trick...

Meh.

This chapter was OK although not your best.

It does well in enticing the appetite of wanting to know more.

Anyways can't wait to see more. So please update soon.

Nice job, dude XD Though the vampire thingie caught me off-guard :P Please continue with the story!

Not a bad chapter. A lot of interesting events, but I do not yet see where it's all leading too.

So I'll wait patiently to see where it goes.

Please update soon.

I really can't tell why of all things you had to go with the vampire theme... I'm really confused now. I used to think that this story is cleverly thought through, but now it just seems you just try to put as many plotwists as you can in it, and that doesn't really help the story's quality. I don't want to hurt you, I'm actually worried about you. Did something happen to you? These last two chapters... like it wasn't even written by the same person. Don't push yourself, because that way you're going to make only mistakes. Ah well anyway, I hope in the end everything is going to be fine. Take your time planning out and writing down the next chapter(s). Don't forget, as much as you write for us, you mainly and most importantly write for yourself. It is your story and you can do anything you want with it. Oh hey, if that means you want to write vampires in the story, go ahead! I'm not here to stop you, it was just so sudden and so... out of character. Okay, enough mumbling. Have fun, and I'll be waiting for the next chapter.

Vamp Hinata is neat since she's got the guts totake on her father and match him. I do think she should stop biting Naruto suddenly and make it more of a loving ritual than eating him.

interesting

So, you made two huge changes to the Naruto-verse that, in reality, hardly changed anything. Even with the watch and five years training and studying with Hinata, he's still just a lame retarded dumbass. I know that's a little redundant to say, but it's still apt.

I originally liked your story cause you kept it mainly in line with the cannon, but I have to say, you have some interesting ideas, and now you're throwing vampires into the story, it should work, but it does. Great so far can't wait to read the rest

Naruto disappearing huh?

This ought to be interesting. Please update soon and stay golden.