Brilliant end to a Brilliant story. I love it!

love it! :D

awesome!

love it! :D

please continue i really enjoyed reading this story i realy love it a lot.

i cant wait for the next chappie XD

OMG TOTALLY LOVE YOU! I got my wish and I am content. And please disregard that earlier comment. I do enjoy the crush I have on Alex and I am so happy right now! You have made my entire day, figuring it's been super stressful with the whole plane ride and everything. I'll see you at school in a couple of weeks. Thanks so much and you have a wonderful Christmas!

And don't worry about people like the one who gave you a bad review. They just don't understand that the characters are what you want them to be, that's the beauty of your story. Plus your story has inspired me to write one of my own. Even though the first two chapters were done while I was playing patient for one of our exercises. It ended up being covered in fake blood. Anyway keep up the good work.

And don't worry about people like the one who gave you a bad review. They just don't understand that the characters are what you want them to be, that's the beauty of your story. Plus your story has inspired me to write one of my own. Even though the first two chapters were done while I was playing patient for one of our exercises. It ended up being covered in fake blood. Anyway keep up the good work.

I love this story it keeps getting better. I love how you made Charlie the super over protected brother.

Amazing story! Please update soon!

Nice chapter, it was sweet -_-

awesome story.

I'm enjoying it immensely. I hope to read more soon. :)

Wow when I came home from school i wouldn't have thought you would have updated it so fast. But then again I had gone for a bike ride, AND I live like 20 minutes away. On top of that, I had to stay after for Geo club. Really good chapter and looking forward to the next one specially. And it will be excellent like the others! :D

Hey I really like this! I'm sorry I couldn't review this sooner! I really like the idea you have going here and I think you should keep going with it. There are a few grammatical (is that even a word?) errors in it and some spelling mistakes but everyone makes them even if they are too proud to admit it. I think that's why they flame other people, so they can make themselves feel better about their stories. Oh well, we can't get rid of all the rude people in this large world so I don't know what we are going to do. Just keep going and don't stop no matter what people say or do. :) btw I will be pming you so that I can say some stuff without flaming my reviews but they will be reviews all the same. :)

My, oh my. What do we have here? Oh, that's right. It's one of those stories that should be outlawed. Listen up, bucko. 1) Your grammar stinks and you need to go back to elementary. 2) Your story is clumped into one gigantic paragraph. 3) The characters are out of character. 4) This chick sounds like she's a Mary Sue. 5) It just plain sucks. I wish I could say I'm sorry, but I'm not. I think you need to get a new hobby.