Awww... How cute! :-) Expecially the hand in the window. Adorable. Can't wait to read the next part.

Loved your fanfic. Your style of writing is indeed evolved, and I admire it very much.

A friendly word,if I may? I wish you had posted the three chapters in succession in a single thread. I was unacquainted with the older ones, and couldn't fully understand what was going on. Then I went to your profile and understood it to be a three parter.

Again,kudos for your effort. Good work! Looking forward to more writing from you.

Red rescue is which season? Uk is only on 3.17 (Steiner commits suicide) but I'm liking it so far.