 DVD 2009-03-19 . chapter 7 I have the Matrix DVD, I think I'll just watch that. Not much difference. |
 Mr Blader X 2004-08-17 . chapter 7love it. Update soon |
 anthropomorphizer 2004-01-16 . chapter 7interesting story. please continue it. |
 cyberfrogX 2003-07-30 . chapter 2very interesting |
 Evelyn15 2003-07-13 . chapter 7Hey!
Exellent chapter! I really liked the way you exlained the matrix in a Magical sense. Be waitin for the new update. |
 Me? 2003-07-10 . chapter 7 Well, I think you tied it in very well. In fact, it's knotted so well, I can't undo it. Yeah. That makes no sense to no one but me. But, it is a good thing. I think you should continue. I like this movie, like this book, and I like this story. WOW! That's a lot of liking for one person! I CAN'T TAKE IT! So, you better keep writing, or I may |
 Sparkles-Chan 2003-07-10 . chapter 7Hehehe! I love this story! Rock on! Good job on this chapter, can't wait for more! ^^ |
 nyqueenie 2003-06-17 . chapter 6 well well well. Quite an interesting tale, here. Looking at the last date posted, i guess i should count this as a dead story. However, might i ask you to reconsider? If you need inspirtation, book 5 and Matrix II are out. If you need time, please inform us. If you need a cheerleader, just hand me the pompoms. But please. Continue. |
 Sing the Muse 2003-05-10 . chapter 6Love your story!! Its very interesting. I'm wondering how your going to pull it all off, but I wish you nothing but good luck. And as an American who can't stand the 'standard system' (as a future engineer, I have to use metric 'cause, duh, that's what the real world uses when it builds stuff) I suppose I'm allowed to show you a bit of a cheat. First, forget what everyone tells you about the cm conversion of a foot! Numbers are meaningless! Pull up the sleeve of your shirt and look at your forearm. That, is a foot. Yes, I have measured things with my forearm when I didn't have a ruler *hush! don't tell my math teacher!!*. And a yard is about from your wrist to your neck, and an inch is from the tip of your thumb to the knuckle. This is all fine in good, unless your a super tall person, and have long arms, then you just have to suffer knowing your arms are longer than a yard. ^_^ |
 Anonymous9 2003-02-18 . chapter 6U definitly have to continue |
 Sparkles-Chan 2003-02-10 . chapter 6Woohoo! Sorry it took me so long to read it, I haven't really had a chance to get online lately, but it was great! It's really picking up and the two stories are going together really well! You're doing a great job so far and I can't wait to read more! |
 "murder" she wrote 2003-02-07 . chapter 6 *sobs* how could kill Snapey? good ol'Snapey? nasty proffessor? buhuhuhu *sobs* a-and Sirius! and *sniffs* Remmy!!!!!! Minnie! *sobsob* you're so-MEAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *starts bawling*
*ah-sniff* okay it's good but you-you killed everyone nice and handsome except for Luci... (which makes me forgive you just a bit)
I still miss Snapey in this one. |
 sirius the homicidal maniac 2003-02-04 . chapter 6 ok...this story is very interesting... but rather predicable. there is almost nothing original here. yeah, you replace guns with wands, call the agents Death Eaters, and give some of the characters hp names. but its really just the matrix. really. pretty much exact same dialogue, same scenes in same exact sequence. yeh. and worst of all... you killed sirius. HOW could you kill sirius? how? |
 SlytherinPsyche 2003-02-04 . chapter 6Amazing story! Very well-done and excellently written! You've tied Harry Potter and The Matrix so well; I don't think this type of fic has been done before. It's great so please continue soon!
Oh and if you wouldn't mind, could you please possibly read and review my own HP fic? I'd be eternally grateful. |
 Asrahn 2003-01-25 . chapter 5WRITE WRITE WRITE!! well written... I´ll give it a 10/10 |