Wow, what a shame, not finishing this first story. It's probably typical of new writers, and I'm glad I checked the last chapter to see if it, by some chance, really was finished...just write it or delete the whole thing. Leaving people dangling is not a good thing!

Why are there so few reviews?

This story is amazing!. Please post more soon

Can't wait for the next chapter! And sorry about Charlie..

I hope Tyler's gonna be okay.. You wrote the last part perfectly!

Oh my God, what's gonna happen to the kid?

Really good.. Let's continue.

You've got me intrigued. Let's read more. I think you'll be gettin' lots of these from me. : )

This is really great! Unfortunatly, I only had time to read through this chapter tonight, but I plan on finishing it tomorrow! I REALLY like it so far!

-Hibernating Teen