| Reviews for The New Order |
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x Kyuubi z 2/29/12 . chapter 4Hot damn I love this story! It's so well crafted! I can't wait for future updates! |
Razgriz13 1/18/12 . chapter 4Hey buddy, Just read Ch.4 and I have to say although its short its very good and got me waiting for the next chapter. |
FrozenAgent47 12/6/11 . chapter 1I love it. I just completely love it. Perfect job with the storyline, and the vocabulary you used was amazing! And what's even better is that you made this chapter so long it just kept me in the story. Keep it up, dude, this is great. |
Just a Crazy-Man 11/30/11 . chapter 3Nicely done...sorry I didn't know you updated. :) |
SierraEchoZulu 9/16/11 . chapter 3Wow. This completely blows away anything and everything I have made in terms of amazingness. This combines almost everything I am interested in- Battlefield, Alternate History, Conspiracy Theories, and two-sided stories- into one thing. It is for this reason that I do not think there is room for improvement- it is just about perfect at it's current state. I am extremely interested in this and I will definitely be reading the story until it's end. |
Razgriz13 9/8/11 . chapter 3I actually liked this chapter man. Don't worry if you took forever, it's like what you told me in your first review of Sons of Osea "...don't rush; remember, there are no deadlines". I hope you keep coming up with great chapters man :) |
Razgriz13 7/17/11 . chapter 2I love the way it's not one faction story alone but through the eyes of the other faction. It bring the conflict to real perceptive that most Fic's fall to do, like you only see from one side of the coin you see both. I'm actually really liking this one, I really want to see the fighting escalate to full on war to see how you describe the fighting. Keep'em up bro. |
Bloodmark Mentor 5/30/11 . chapter 1Wow. My first review and its from an asshole. You really couldn't have sent that in a personal message? |