I thought the story was tight and followed a clean narrative arc, which is hard to find in a 50-sentence prompt. I also liked seeing the broad range of situations and emotional highs/lows of Seth and Eirika - it really fleshed everything out nicely. Great work!

Oh my gosh this is just so incredibly touching! Wonderful job! There are one or two errors in grammar that you may want to fix, but aside from that this is absolutely gorgeous.

Keep writing! )

Ah, this brings back memories. You & me playing Sacred Stones for the first time, and falling in love with this pairing. Thank you so much for posting this!