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| Gerald the Puppet 5/20/13 . chapter 29
I love the relationship these three have, both the not taking each other's crap and the ability to cut through it all and identify what they really mean/feel.
Also the DVDs? I assumed they were just, er, "distracted". This was so much better.
| bazuka74 5/20/13 . chapter 29
Gotta love Effy & Cook, I've mentioned before that you've created awesome dynamics between all the characters but Naomi/Effy/Cook's friendship is simply special. They're very open & completely honest with one another & they all need each other, that's just so endearing...
Effy describing her date just killed me, it was sweet & hilarious at the same time, very glad that finally she is with someone who respects her enough & doesn't just jump her bones... Cook watching the chick flick with Katie, what can I say?.. pure classic. ;)
I can understand why Naomi's being the way she is, Emily did hurt her a lot & it wasn't that long ago but, by the same token,.. yeah, she needs to start responding to Emily a bit more, at least admit to her that they are girlfriends & tell her that she loves her, she can't be scared all her life now, can she? Be brave, Naomi. ;)
Thank you for the great & quick update. :-)
| FrenchKiwi1994 5/20/13 . chapter 29
I love Effy/Naomi/Cook 's moments... We could feel the amazing friendship they're sharing. I loved this chap :)
| Michelle1017 5/20/13 . chapter 29
Yay another chapter, I love this story :-)
Love the friendship between the three of them and how they just tell one another exactly what they think.
Lol at Cook admitting to watching the notebook.
Hmm I think Naomi has some thinking to do, looking forward to when she does tell Emily she loves her again as it will make Emily so so happy.
Looking forward to more :-)
| fookyeahskins 5/19/13 . chapter 29
I think so too.. they are more than a little bit right. Naomi will get there in a twisty sort of way? Hmmm that's unnerving! I want to know now, god dammit! Oh and thanks for these semi regular updates (semi regular as opposed to the last couple of months lol). You know I always get the most excited for your story updates :). Keep 'em coming!
| marsupial1974 5/19/13 . chapter 29
Man, you gotta love Effy and Cook! :) only those two could call Naomi out on her bullsh*t and live to tell the tale! But they're right! Naomi does seem to be pushing Emily away to protect herself, even if she's not doing it deliberately and is not aware that she's doing it.
And the whole part about Cook watching the Notebook, and liking it? Classic!
Can't wait to see what happens next:) great update!
| tubbingtonheights 5/19/13 . chapter 29
I'm glad Naomi's on her way back to Em. The way Effy went about describing her date was really cute. I hope we get to see what comes of that. Great chapter, excited for the next!(:
| whoslonelyroadistheanswer 5/19/13 . chapter 29
Babe, you're trying to keep control, you're trying not to let Emily have some sort of hold over you, so you're not letting her in, or telling her you love her, just so you can pretend she can't hurt you.
love the dynamic you created! Thanks for the quick update!
| tubbingtonheights 5/16/13 . chapter 28
This is amazing! I love that they're taking their time to get back to how they were. So excited for more(:
| Gerald the Puppet 5/16/13 . chapter 28
A fun chapter! It's nice to see that they (Naomi) are making progress.
I really like how you showed us all of their conversation on the date, rather than hand waving it away. (Way to go, perceptive Naomi!)
The accent, and the DVDs bit, made me laugh.
| fookyeahskins 5/16/13 . chapter 28
The lovely date was lovely! I don't even know what to write because it was pretty much perfect. I'm glad they've gotten back into the flirty silliness (was it?) mode again. That's the best! Can't wait for the next one. Also for Naomi to finally get there. I will be prepared! Probably not but I like it that way :)
| aeondj14 5/15/13 . chapter 28
Yey you're back! :)
Got quite carried away there. hehe
You can't easily lose me with this story you know.. :)
My favorite part of the date was the last bit when Ms Campbell turned back and kissed Ms Fitch and made it into a much perfect date! :) I think I squealed a bit with a big grin on my face. hehe
I still wore a big smile while typing this. Excited for the next Chapter.
Til next time. :)
| FrenchKiwi1994 5/14/13 . chapter 28
FINALLY, NAOMI ! I'm so happy ! That was so cute... And I'm glad they had a serious talk together... I hope things will stay this way and that they will sort everything out... As always, can't wait for the next chapter x
| bazuka74 5/14/13 . chapter 28
One of my favourite stories... I like quite a few of your works, my absolute favourite one of yours just has to be 'An affair to remember' simply 'coz the end part of it was so very unexpected (I like to be surprised/shocked like that). :-)
About the new chapter, what can I say?.. I loved it, all of it: the easy banter, the light flirting, the soul searching... everything. Oh, & the kiss at the end of the date- I loved that especially. ;)
I love all the relationship dynamics here too: Naomi & Effy/Cook/Katie, Naomi & Gina, Naomi & Emily/Danny, Naomi & Mandeeehhh the giant, etc... so very believable & so much like the 'Skins' characters, I can just picture it all in my head.
I'm a bit worried about Naomi's huge desire to go travelling though, I mean, she's not doing anything sane career wise & she's got Emily/Danny in her life now, so Idk how is that one gonna work out... I know, the story is not there yet but I can't help thinking about it... seems to me that Naomi is just wasting her life/time a little bit atm (except for the times when she's with Emily, of course)...
I got really intrigued by Naomi's trying to find her father years ago, what if he found her instead?.. that would have been a really interesting read imo.
Anyway, thank you again for your awesome story, please don't give it up, will you? *looking very hopeful*
| Michelle1017 5/14/13 . chapter 28
Omg these two are just so cute together and it is more and more obvious just how much they want each other, I know Naomi needs time and Emily is being so brilliant but cannot wait for them to be back on track.
Naomi's idea for the day out with Danny was so sweet and I'm sure they will have a lovely day.
Lol at Cook and Katie, you can just imagine what they had been up to before the two girls got back.
Loving the kiss at the end, just so so so cute :-)
Can't wait for more :D