"Kevin puts all of his strong into not flinching and moving an inch." His strong what?

"Kevin realizes this much as Chloe learns over slightly and turns the car radio". What does Kevin learn? And you can't "learn" over but you can "lean" over.

"Kevin sips his coffee with a snot". Eww his coffee has a snot in it. That's just gross.

"Kevin yanks out of his closet to get of the apartment like " to get of the apartment what? You need to proofread this fic. Some it it makes sense and some doesn't because of the grammatical errors. BTW, you don't "loose" something, you "lose" it.

That was an awesome Chloe/Kevin story! I also can't wait for your Villy story. I can't believe the writers played with our emotions like that! (;_;)

I really enjoyed that love Chloe and Kevin